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I enjoyed reading the story.. it is indeed very interesting.. how I wish that mia and will would be together forever soon and overcome the obstacles that are on their way..there should be someone other than the Ford who could invent a medicine for the cure of his mother...hope soon before William decides to choose Melissa rather than Mia for the sake of his mother..
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This is indeed a nice work. The story line is great and the characters are unique. I love the story and can't wait to read to the end. I sincerely appreciate your work and encourage you to keep updating the story whenever you can but please don't take long. Kudos to you the author. Thanks for keeping me busy with your novel.
Wow this is so interesting. I love the storyline. Kudos author your work is good and I can't wait to see the end. Please give us more because am eager and anxiously waiting for more updates. Thanks a lot.
It a nice story it good for young people to think wide not rush in deciding things and also family is priority more of love and support your love in all means love is what u don't get easily accessible I think Mia n will are good pair where they are very good as person's their life content more of love and support for each other I think when Mia comes to know what's going on so she may help him by astics Melissa our it can be that she would give up on will for his mother but it should not be I hope that they may have a beautiful family and keep loving each other
I am really loving this story. I can't wait to finish it. I hope this Evan is not William's friend, confidante and lawyer. Most importantly I hope he is not a love interest. And I sincerely hope Melissa will not try to murder her rival
Love the story. However when it comes to uploading stories not as good. Author doesn’t upload regularly. The characters are well built. Just wish chapters came out more frequently.
It's been over a month are you planning on continuing this story or not please. I am desperately waiting to know how would our Hero tackle her request
I love the stories a lot and its very addictive as well ,the author of the story has done very well ....congrat to the translator as well Hope to get More stories from the author soon...
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This story is reminiscent with memories of childhood friendship built on trust, loyalty and commitment. Not on achievement or riches. This makes for an interesting read. The problem is the slow paced release of the chapters. For anyone who has excitedly started reading it, if continues to takes before a chapter is released, that interest will be lost.
Story plot is great , ****** n straightforward The characters re grt xpecially d relationship btw Willy n Steph Cant help bt look forward for d updates Grt job @ author
Thanks for the new chapter dear. For people who follow this story it would be be better not to mention that you prioritized writing some other story instead. You can capture more readers b'coz your story is good but you have to be more consistent. Fighting!
Aurthor. Pls don't make William choose path o decision that he don't want. That make reader, like me, disappointed.. Even if he choose other girl, will he be happy? His heart only Mia.. Pls let Mia n him happy ever after..
It's not entirely romance It's bring out their family relationship too Telling indirectly whatever we facing outside, there still warm. Place welcoming us that call HOME
Don't make it so complicated In reality we follow our heart Sometimes too complicated isn't want reader desire Simplify it, don't let reader has wild guess. Haha We read to feel excited on how well their relationship, how cool author mind n imagination to express in wording. Not feeling disguise with the character
Thanks for author who wrote such a good story.. Family relationship was built-in strongly, lovingly n healthy environment. Father allowed his daughter or son to choose their own decision not forcing them for MONEY or BUSINESS purposes. Mr n Mrs Hills taught and educated Mia warmly n sincerely.. Readers who are parent of children could take note from this story. It's not entirely about male n female lead love story but with support from families to develop memorable memories from childhood until *****hood... Less harshness, less hatred no revenging to male or female lead from third parties..
well if you dont mind our dear author,,,, we want more bed scene, love scene for u declare that this novel is romance...we are applying the tips, or techniques in winning d heart if our partners when we read new & exciting ideas you ate inculcating mind... we are adults & dince we are gradually absorb w ur beautiful piece continue excite d mind of your reader....regards & more power.....rekease all chapter & its up to us to unlock the chapter...
The story is quite alright and it's leading to somewhere else. More updates in the future. Make more exciting chapters. Make it alive a little bit.
At first I thought is was the tipical CEO vs girl story, then it changes into a childhod love story, then in a plot with the ill mother and company matters, I like it a lot it's easy reading but interesting at the same time. Thanks for your novel and dedication, keep on going 👏👏👏👏
Hmmm... The story is more realistic... Waiting for the author to finish the story.. I'm done reading in just few hours. More chapter please
I love the story but may I suggest put a little bit thrill or interesting to the story, coz for me I feel kinda of boring if this continue. I think make a twist of the story a little bit change the attitude of the girl it's so feminine.. hehee ( suggesting!! Only if it might.. ) Thank u!
i started with too much expectation or too much of something that i guess my patience drop to zero after trying and trying to reason out that dense male lead is okay... but i could not take it anymore.
I love the characters and the writing quality, anyways Mia and William are sooo damn cute, And i sooo love Stephanie she's the best sister-in-law mia could ask for, this story is damn good, Just the teary parts of this book is lit.
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The cover looks like an intro to a horror film. I know they are holding hands and something, but there's just something creepy with 2 kids side by side on a slightly mysterious and dark background.
So far so good. I was hesitant to read this at first because I thought it would be so much just like the other CEO stories, which is becoming so cliché. But boy was I wrong. The facing is really good and the characters were well thought of. The plot is developing good and I feel that there is so much more into it. I look forward to the future chapters of this story, I'm definitely adding this to my library. 👍👍
i really like this story...the sibling's relationship,reminds me of my brother,hehehehe....its a nice story,but needs patience for its not good to ask so much update for the author even tho i'm shamlessly thingking about it...hehehehe,i guess i just have to be more patient in dealing with this....i just wish,hope,and pray for the continous and good outcome of this novel,,....🙏👌🙇♀️
The development of the story was really great that when I first found this novel I though I wont be able to read it continuesly but here I am already finished at the published chapters and is waiting for an update already. Ive read all 34 chapters in a day. I was not able to take my eyes off from reading it.
Just started reading it and thumbs up for the author. Love how the female lead is not written off as perfect. Makes it more realistic and relatable. Good writing style:√
The story is nice eventhough there's quite a bit of confusion about the characters dialogue. But all in all, it's very interesting. I want to find out more as this story develops. 😊
It's good story but how it's written I think it's short story not a long one because it's only matter of love and love reveal so it's good for short trem Maybe I'm not confirm because I don't no writer throughs .
Such a sweet story. I am intrigued to hear the rest of the story. Good luck to our heroine and hero. They deserve all the happiness. Just so sweet.
I enjoyed reading the story.. it is indeed very interesting.. how I wish that mia and will would be together forever soon and overcome the obstacles that are on their way..there should be someone other than the Ford who could invent a medicine for the cure of his mother...hope soon before William decides to choose Melissa rather than Mia for the sake of his mother..
Spoiler de révélation This is indeed a nice work. The story line is great and the characters are unique. I love the story and can't wait to read to the end. I sincerely appreciate your work and encourage you to keep updating the story whenever you can but please don't take long. Kudos to you the author. Thanks for keeping me busy with your novel.
Wow this is so interesting. I love the storyline. Kudos author your work is good and I can't wait to see the end. Please give us more because am eager and anxiously waiting for more updates. Thanks a lot.
It a nice story it good for young people to think wide not rush in deciding things and also family is priority more of love and support your love in all means love is what u don't get easily accessible I think Mia n will are good pair where they are very good as person's their life content more of love and support for each other I think when Mia comes to know what's going on so she may help him by astics Melissa our it can be that she would give up on will for his mother but it should not be I hope that they may have a beautiful family and keep loving each other
I am really loving this story. I can't wait to finish it. I hope this Evan is not William's friend, confidante and lawyer. Most importantly I hope he is not a love interest. And I sincerely hope Melissa will not try to murder her rival
Love the story. However when it comes to uploading stories not as good. Author doesn’t upload regularly. The characters are well built. Just wish chapters came out more frequently.
It's been over a month are you planning on continuing this story or not please. I am desperately waiting to know how would our Hero tackle her request
I love the stories a lot and its very addictive as well ,the author of the story has done very well ....congrat to the translator as well Hope to get More stories from the author soon...
Spoiler de révélation This story is reminiscent with memories of childhood friendship built on trust, loyalty and commitment. Not on achievement or riches. This makes for an interesting read. The problem is the slow paced release of the chapters. For anyone who has excitedly started reading it, if continues to takes before a chapter is released, that interest will be lost.
Story plot is great , ****** n straightforward The characters re grt xpecially d relationship btw Willy n Steph Cant help bt look forward for d updates Grt job @ author
Thanks for the new chapter dear. For people who follow this story it would be be better not to mention that you prioritized writing some other story instead. You can capture more readers b'coz your story is good but you have to be more consistent. Fighting!
Aurthor. Pls don't make William choose path o decision that he don't want. That make reader, like me, disappointed.. Even if he choose other girl, will he be happy? His heart only Mia.. Pls let Mia n him happy ever after..
It's not entirely romance It's bring out their family relationship too Telling indirectly whatever we facing outside, there still warm. Place welcoming us that call HOME
Don't make it so complicated In reality we follow our heart Sometimes too complicated isn't want reader desire Simplify it, don't let reader has wild guess. Haha We read to feel excited on how well their relationship, how cool author mind n imagination to express in wording. Not feeling disguise with the character
Thanks for author who wrote such a good story.. Family relationship was built-in strongly, lovingly n healthy environment. Father allowed his daughter or son to choose their own decision not forcing them for MONEY or BUSINESS purposes. Mr n Mrs Hills taught and educated Mia warmly n sincerely.. Readers who are parent of children could take note from this story. It's not entirely about male n female lead love story but with support from families to develop memorable memories from childhood until *****hood... Less harshness, less hatred no revenging to male or female lead from third parties..
well if you dont mind our dear author,,,, we want more bed scene, love scene for u declare that this novel is romance...we are applying the tips, or techniques in winning d heart if our partners when we read new & exciting ideas you ate inculcating mind... we are adults & dince we are gradually absorb w ur beautiful piece continue excite d mind of your reader....regards & more power.....rekease all chapter & its up to us to unlock the chapter...
The story is quite alright and it's leading to somewhere else. More updates in the future. Make more exciting chapters. Make it alive a little bit.
At first I thought is was the tipical CEO vs girl story, then it changes into a childhod love story, then in a plot with the ill mother and company matters, I like it a lot it's easy reading but interesting at the same time. Thanks for your novel and dedication, keep on going 👏👏👏👏
Hmmm... The story is more realistic... Waiting for the author to finish the story.. I'm done reading in just few hours. More chapter please
I love the story but may I suggest put a little bit thrill or interesting to the story, coz for me I feel kinda of boring if this continue. I think make a twist of the story a little bit change the attitude of the girl it's so feminine.. hehee ( suggesting!! Only if it might.. ) Thank u!
i started with too much expectation or too much of something that i guess my patience drop to zero after trying and trying to reason out that dense male lead is okay... but i could not take it anymore.
I love the characters and the writing quality, anyways Mia and William are sooo damn cute, And i sooo love Stephanie she's the best sister-in-law mia could ask for, this story is damn good, Just the teary parts of this book is lit.
Spoiler de révélation The cover looks like an intro to a horror film. I know they are holding hands and something, but there's just something creepy with 2 kids side by side on a slightly mysterious and dark background.
So far so good. I was hesitant to read this at first because I thought it would be so much just like the other CEO stories, which is becoming so cliché. But boy was I wrong. The facing is really good and the characters were well thought of. The plot is developing good and I feel that there is so much more into it. I look forward to the future chapters of this story, I'm definitely adding this to my library. 👍👍
i really like this story...the sibling's relationship,reminds me of my brother,hehehehe....its a nice story,but needs patience for its not good to ask so much update for the author even tho i'm shamlessly thingking about it...hehehehe,i guess i just have to be more patient in dealing with this....i just wish,hope,and pray for the continous and good outcome of this novel,,....🙏👌🙇♀️
The development of the story was really great that when I first found this novel I though I wont be able to read it continuesly but here I am already finished at the published chapters and is waiting for an update already. Ive read all 34 chapters in a day. I was not able to take my eyes off from reading it.
Just started reading it and thumbs up for the author. Love how the female lead is not written off as perfect. Makes it more realistic and relatable. Good writing style:√
The story is nice eventhough there's quite a bit of confusion about the characters dialogue. But all in all, it's very interesting. I want to find out more as this story develops. 😊
It's good story but how it's written I think it's short story not a long one because it's only matter of love and love reveal so it's good for short trem Maybe I'm not confirm because I don't no writer throughs .
Such a sweet story. I am intrigued to hear the rest of the story. Good luck to our heroine and hero. They deserve all the happiness. Just so sweet.