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Updates, NO updates, till now man,,,,,,,..... What should i say................There are not many chap in the first place why. huh.................................
What could i expect of you author looks like you are very fond of dropping your books and the hopes of us reader s i will see at purgatory hope you would have some defense with you
Hey bring more chapter of this novel. I love this one...looks like so much chill and fun there.....hope it 'll b long run... And plz increase more chapter per week more than 10
I was waiting for others to write a review for me and then see what happens but I have to do it myself I. I am writing chapters these days and busy making stockpiles so when they are ready I will release them ok.
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This novel has a good direction from what I read so far. I see a lot of potential and believe that if a few cool curballs are thrown in to differentiate this from other novels this would be a nice hidden gem. Looking forward to seeing more chapters released.
It reads like an old RPG video game. With cool action scenes overlaid with dialogue and everything. I almost want to give it to a game designer. It'll make for a great adaptation - think about it :)
Updates, NO updates, till now man,,,,,,,..... What should i say................There are not many chap in the first place why. huh.................................
What could i expect of you author looks like you are very fond of dropping your books and the hopes of us reader s i will see at purgatory hope you would have some defense with you
Hey bring more chapter of this novel. I love this one...looks like so much chill and fun there.....hope it 'll b long run... And plz increase more chapter per week more than 10
I was waiting for others to write a review for me and then see what happens but I have to do it myself I. I am writing chapters these days and busy making stockpiles so when they are ready I will release them ok.
Spoiler de révélation This novel has a good direction from what I read so far. I see a lot of potential and believe that if a few cool curballs are thrown in to differentiate this from other novels this would be a nice hidden gem. Looking forward to seeing more chapters released.
It reads like an old RPG video game. With cool action scenes overlaid with dialogue and everything. I almost want to give it to a game designer. It'll make for a great adaptation - think about it :)