Synopsis
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The entertainment world is a hard place to survive. Vying at its peak, people are retiring, backing off due to fear of failure. In an unseemingly new company which is about to decline, 7 boys enter its halls.
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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
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Logdesh, Ermory and SpaceIsLife
Written by Aeiara
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1Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Écrire un avisVolume 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Volume 1 : Prologue: The First step!
- 1 I know....! I.... think! 6 years ago
- 2 My Dream! My Passion! 6 years ago
- 3 Not now. 6 years ago
- 4 Endure... Endure... 6 years ago
- 5 Well, this isn't going well, is it? 6 years ago
- 6 Running away! 6 years ago
- 7 No one's stopping me now! 6 years ago
- 8 A Companion 6 years ago
- 9 My solemn promise 6 years ago
- 10 Preparation! 6 years ago
- 11 First step. 6 years ago
Each chapter is less than 500 characters. Read a couple of chapters and nothing remotely interesting is happening. No world building, no character dept. The only thing that we know is his age and dream. Most of the chapters are like reading a movie script. My advice. Pour more effort in each chapter, make it longer, more meaningful. Your grammar is okey to read. Instead of making a list of things to do, make it him saying what he needs to do, why and a backup plan if that doesn't work out(Don't you make it like that in your head in your daily life ?) I will come back later, hope you fix the problems :)