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(On Hold) The Not So Perfect Being In The Omniverse
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Synopsis
A powerful being has enough of his boredom so he planned to roam the multiverse and enjoy his life.
He would kill you and take what is yours if you make an enemy out of him though you would get benefits if you chose to be his ally.
Ray Morningstar which is his name would travel the vast multiverse while loving and playing with the plot.
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NOTE:- Mc actions are influenced by me so if you think that he has done something stupid then that means I was the one who made him do that. Though I don't think that I would do something stupid but just in case so I'm writing this note.
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There would be no use of clones be in a fight or sex. I hate that shit.
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Read tags before reading it and uploading one chapter a day.
Current World- One Piece
Fast-Paced Romance
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Note: I'm writing this because of boredom and this idea was in my head for some time. I would appreciate your criticism however spamming wouldn't be appreciated.
If you don't like this fanfiction then okay leave here a review and read other fanfics of great authors. Please don't comment on every chapter that you don't like, etc.
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Very good. This fanfic is not for weak to strong fans it's for OP enjoyers with sharp jaws, tight abs, no flaws. This is harem story for giga chads. Well I hope MC will have every girl. Author are you planning to go for MCU?
What can I say hmmm, very good fanfic you peasant? Writing Quality is good, stability of updates good, Story development is good. Character design is good, World background is good, and overall "PLOT" is good as well. Giving him 12 inches is good in one piece since there is a lot of smexy tall ladies. In conclusion, Aizen sensei approves.
Writing Quality:5/5 Stability of Updates:4/5 Story Development:5/5 Character Design:5/5 World Background4.5/5 what are you doing here.
guess its dropped
Really now? Quite ballsy of you to think I'll be someone's playing, dear~~ But the story is interesting. Like how the mc isn't exactly a goodie two shoes. That would be disgusting, am i right? 🙂
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Just going to give it a 5 sinces its a good fanfic. Mc is op and i Mean OP but the main focus on the story isnt the battles right now its just the Mc trying to have fun and live a better life than he had in the past wee he was bored. Writing Quality is good its long and its easy to understand. Updates are 7 times a week so yep its fantastic. Story development is also good the mc wants to interact with factions and its in the development stages so i can expect new things in the future, character design is "Perfect" since the mc literally is perfect which i am fine w and he is op but im sure its not about his perfection that the story wants to go on instead the interactions and the world in it. World background is also good currently in One Piece and i think will be going to other worlds. Keep it up <3
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I don't know just feeling like giving you 5 stars because you mentioned that there won't be any clones. .. ..... .. ... .. ... .... .. ... .
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ - not really 5☆, but I will give 5☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆○○○ - early chapters where really good. but now. I see no developments. the only development I see is his mastery in capturing pokemon.(getting mihawk and scaring the marines is the only thing is happening. the story is more in sèx and BS power ups. not much for a story Development). - hope to see some actual development. ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆○○ - his personality is getting worse(maybe that's his character development). - Physical design is good thoe. ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆○ 《 English is not my first language(just saying)》
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Hello Author here, this my second fanfiction on this site. I had this idea for some time in mind so I decided to write it here. You would find many things in the fanfic which some of you might like or some of you might not. Still, I had given myself a review so here I am.