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Chapitre 3: Mistakes were made

The four were back to their playful ways, even if they kept to themselves. Terra was probably the most playful one out of all of them, she had covered the entire realm in annoying little asteroids.

She looked so pleased with herself, like looking at a masterpiece. Thankfully Gale was rite behind up cleaning up her mess, even if not purposely.

Gale was starting to get a little out of hand lately, all of them have, well, except Luna, shes been awfully quiet lately.

She would only watch from the distance as her siblings playing and run away whenever one of them got to close. It was pretty sad honestly, but at least I didn't have to worry about her.

The other three, no, i had to reign them in somehow before they end up breaking the realm they created.

And I had a pretty intreating idea, it would take some time to make but the framework should still work for now.

All I needed was a little bit of energy from all for of them.

~ • ~ • ~

Why, why had all of them left her, it wasn't so bad when it was only Gale and Terra, I still had Ember to play with but now...

Even from here I could see his little star, he was whizzing around it totally enraptured by it. Gale and Terra still played together, they would often see what would happened if two very large asteroids collided.

But me, I had nothing to do, what could you make with ice? Water couldn't last, it just kept on freezing, and sometimes I just feel like... like... freezing everything.

It wasn't fare how they all had sometime to play with but I was stuck watching from the sidelines. They should know how it feels, to watch as they do wonderful things but stuck being able to do nothing.

~ • ~ • ~

I spoke too soon...

Luna, she was perhaps the most dangerous out of all of them.


L’AVIS DES CRÉATEURS
_Nitro_ _Nitro_

Okay, so i decided to go with the world pov to be the system’s pov. But as you can see the systems not much of a system rn.

My idea was that the system is actually a fragment of the soul that the four elementals exploded that created the realm.

It’s not very smart but it has some leeway over the realm giving it the ability to make a system. The system i’ll have to think on how I want to do it.

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