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I thought US run on foster care system? Do they still have orphanage there?

Will he learn curse technique reversal? Like erasing the innate curse technique etched on the body of his opponents.

Spreading the knowledge about haki will remove it's specialness. I think turning Zoro into something common or uninteresting will not be good. I hope you keep haki as their family signature technique.

Huh? Being young is the best time to move into another country. Children are more adaptable and more malleable. They can adapt faster to new language and culture.

I just wished you stuck with JJK naming terms. It's hard to immerse myself to the story with those none JJK terms. 😔

Growth entity? What? Huh? You mean the star plasma vessel? Right? Did I watch a different Sub version when I watch jjk2?

I don't know whether some lines or paragraph are dialogues. Are they somehow internal dialogues? They are outside the quotation marks. It's kinda confusing sometimes.

Isn't it because of Tengen's barrier that's why curse energy is concentrated in Japan? Consequently, sorcerers are more common in Japan than in other parts of the world. Is that canon or just some fanon I've read somewhere?

If I was in that situation and I am broke, i would just create the 'Construction' curse technique. I would then construct gold daily and sell it.

Fix the the POV, stick to 1st person POV.

The author's neighbors should be notified by this fanfic, just to be safe. So that they know what to look out for.

Can Mai construct gold for the clan? More wealth for the clan is good right?

Thank you for the chapter. ❤️

Captain America and Johnny Storm will look alike then?

I was expecting him to have ant-king level nen, and nen techniques plus fighting experience. Meh. And at least burn that hand so that it can't be re attached.😑

Isn't "incarnate" more accurate term to use than "transmigrate" with their situation?

Yay! You're back!❤️