The last line seems like it could use some proofreading!
"In our old age we designed a ritual. Through this ritual we assimilated all our knowledge and left for the magic decide to a true worthy heir for us. Though our blood families got few of our inheritances, out actual inheritance was left for the worthy magical heir and the magic have deemed you worthy."
Legacy of Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Graviele
Thanks for engaging with us! It is an interesting and different story, so I am interested to see where it goes. You are an amazing author who has more than earned the trust of your readers to see where you can go with a different story! Thanks again!
[Thank you for your time and patience.]
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
I love the story! Thanks for the world!
Thanks for letting us know!
Just here to say thanks to the author for another great chapter. This story is amazing!
Fantastic story! This is the first of his stories that I have read, but after getting up to date I plan on reading more of his work. He did a wonderful job creating engaging new characters and realistic versions of previously known characters.
I loved the arc, aspects that I think could have been smoother, but still a great arc!
I cannot believe so many people did not like this arc--especially the School Infiltration Arc in the Eastern Continent. Many of the things I wrote on that arc can be considered great predictions based on the recent chapter of the Black Clover manga. And as more chapters come out, more predictions might come true.
Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Thanks for the chapter! Keep doing your thing! Love your writing!
Wonderful Naruto fanfiction. It does tend to take liberties with the original material and the main character has some OP tendencies. However, for a fanfiction it does an admirable job fulfilling its niche of providing a new and interesting story set in a beloved universe.