Thanks for the feedback, Sojuuuus! I understand how it might feel a bit overwhelming by Chapter 22—there’s been a lot of moving parts and strategies unfolding. The story builds on earlier chapters where Ethan’s battles with the Vanguard Initiative and Jonathan’s schemes are set up. I’ll work on ensuring the flow stays clear while keeping the stakes high. I appreciate you sticking with the story so far—feel free to share what parts might feel unclear, and I’d be happy to explain or consider ways to make it more seamless. Your input really helps me improve!
Thank you so much for reading and for the support! I’m thrilled you’re enjoying the story so far. Don’t worry—more chapters are on the way, and things are about to get even more intense. Stay tuned, and I’ll keep the updates coming!
Thanks so much for the review! I’m really glad you’re enjoying Ethan’s journey and the intense battles—those chess-like moments are some of my favorite to write. I hear you on the anonymous warnings! Things are building up, and I promise a big twist is coming soon that’ll bring everything together. I’m excited for you to see what’s next. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts—it really keeps me motivated to keep delivering the best story I can! More action and surprises are on the way!
Thank you so much for your kind words and support! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story. Stay tuned more chapters are on the way very soon! 😊
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Thank you so much for your honest review, Afakasi. I completely understand your concerns about the story progression and how it might feel repetitive with the same kind of conflicts. You’re absolutely right that there’s so much potential in the concept of the Cheat Investment System, and I appreciate you pointing that out. Your feedback has given me a lot to think about, and I’ll be making adjustments to balance the narrative. I want to focus more on building Ethan’s company and exploring the vast opportunities the system provides rather than solely focusing on singular rivalries. Reviews like yours help me grow as a writer, and I’m truly grateful for your time and input. I’ll do my best to make the story even better moving forward!
Rebirth of a Billionaire Heir
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