I’m a fan of this.
Lucius is him
One of my favourite chapters so far, I really like this Zorya charcther… an intesting one she is!
W queen
The sun… AH THE SUN!
And the sun—ah, the sun!—a dim and withering thing, no longer the fiery herald of day but a dying ember cast adrift in a sky of despair. Its pallid light struggled to pierce the heavy veil, leaving the world in a cold, somber twilight. With each passing season, its warmth waned further, as if it, too, sought escape from the cursed land below.
Death be with you
Fantasy · VALTHARION
Gut Wrenching Slow Burn
I don’t like it… I love it! Truely a masterful debut to the world of Benedict’s Wrath, the vocabulary is so vivid, that it was truly Gut Wrenching! I too loved the style of writing that was on display, amazing in total.
Rashness is the pitfall of human kind.
"NO! DON'T BE RASH!" Benedict's voice rang out, commanding and desperate. He rose to his feet unsteadily, his arms raised to halt their advance. "This man could be the key to understanding what just occurred. He might hold the answers we need-"
Death be with you
Fantasy · VALTHARION
When I read the first chapter of this book, I was blown away by the intricate use of vocabulary, but as I ventured even further into the book, with each new instalment, I was blown away even further yet again! After reading your latest chapter, it makes your first one look like a mere rookies work—despite that chapter dwarfing most on this site. I hope for this steady and consistent improvement to happen with each chapter, as everyone feels more flawless than the last. Godspeed, Hansaldia.
Death be with you
Fantasy · VALTHARION