The overall average is 1700 words per chapter, and I published all 54 chapters in 18 days with 85K words. I await a new review! Remember that I am a new author too, please evaluate the writing, translation, my character development, plot and system.
Last day in Valyria part 2
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The MC's maternal family is one of the novel's secrets, more clues will be revealed in Asshai's volume. The war between the faceless men and the Valyrian Blood Mages ended with their victory. Since the volcanoes of Valyria did the work. More details of the faceless men's plans will be revealed at the end of Asshai's volume. :)
End of volume 1 - Valyria
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The coins were in their bags, the largest value in the safe was in the slave ownership contract, properties and the merchant's documents.
Then I call Omar and we go together to Fatty Zhang's cabin to look at the contents of Fat Brown's 3 safes. Once inside the cabin, I finally use the keys the blacksmith gave me and manage to open all 3 safes. I'm sad to see that they all contain a lot of paper and little money. Even the Browns' bags had more money than the safes. It makes sense, after all, it's better to keep everything with you when you have a theft-proof bag. We divide the few coins and leave the only gold bar for Fatty Zhang, who is a little short on money compared to me and Omar. Adding up everything I have now, I have over 1,300 gold coins. I leave them and say goodbye, reminding them about dinner in my cabin tonight.
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Oh, look who's back... Yes, this chapter made you give me such an unfair review, I hope you change it now that you've read it.
Last day in Valyria part 2
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Hello everyone, I'm the author of this fic. Today, volume 1 was completed and I came here to leave my review for those of you who want to read the novel. After arriving in Valyria, the MC makes a huge effort to collect all the resources he can before the 7-day deadline ends. He is also preparing a ship and a crew for the long journey to Asshai. On top of that, he also has the system quests. While the MC takes care of all this, we see an incredibly rich and full of life Valyria through the eyes of other characters. Faceless men fighting against the cruel Blood Mages, crime lords, dragon riders, minor nobles, merchants, a woman who seeks revenge for her past, a Velaryon who did not flee to Westeros, and many other minor characters who experience firsthand all the consequences of the MC's actions in these last days of Old Valyria. If you don't like multiple POV then this is not a read for you.
I'm not Native American, can you explain to me better why using a dash for one person and quotation marks for the other made it confusing? I would like to take this opportunity to ask for an example when 3 or more people are talking. If I should use " " for all 3 how would this be less confusing?
—Northern district of which city? I answer quickly, not believing the memories that were emerging in my mind.
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As you can see, there are two Blood Mages guarding and watching over the place. Of course, Rafael doesn't know this, but just having the knights there makes it very risky for his current self. But don't worry, the Valyrians' legacy of blood magic won't be missed by the MC as he finds other paths in Asshai.
I understand what he's saying between the lines, so I finish the passenger registration to prepare for the loot. Before that, I review the passenger list one last time. We have 108 passengers and a baby, it should have been 110. I'm a little over the goal of having only 100 people, but remembering that there are almost 15 children and teenagers, we should be fine. I return to my cabin and empty my inventory, put on my full leather armor, just replacing the bracers with metal ones. I equip the pistol again, leave 2 loaded crossbows in the inventory just in case, and I'm finally ready. My inventory should be enough for the 10 tons we need, but I plan on collecting three times that. I just don't know if we'll have time to board with everything.
The Asshai's Bloodmage
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