Hi, I am newbie author trying touch the hearts of millions through my stories! I hope you enjoy my work and have a good time as much as I have writing these novels!
2024-08-18 Se unióPakistan
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Waqar_Ahmed_3614
1 months ago
Replied to Chloe_lara
Thanks for your kind words.. Wait till for the more chapters don't wanna spoil other ending for the story lol.
I'm writing this review at 10 chapters so far, and this book is heading in the right direction. However, I do want to leave some feedback as I want this book to flourish.
So far this book has started out quite strongly, although it introduces a lot of characters quite fast. World building so far is top notch, with an actual sense of mystery and excitement for what is going to happen.
Only feedback to give is that the pacing is a bit slow, but that's not too bad and even makes it intriguing to me.
Good job! excited to see where it goes
Lyla never believed in the existence of magic, creatures of legend, or hidden realms—until a chance encounter pulls her into Eryndelle, a dark and enchanted world beyond her wildest imagination. In this strange land, vampires, dragons, and ancient powers reign, and Lyla’s arrival is no mere accident.
At the heart of this new world is Alaric, a brooding and powerful vampire with a tortured past. Despite his deadly nature, Lyla is drawn to him—his pain, his strength, and the undeniable pull of their connection. As their bond deepens, Lyla learns that Alaric’s past is tied to her own in ways she never expected. He holds a power greater than he knows, a secret that could change everything.
But as they navigate the dangers of Eryndelle, where dark creatures lurk and loyalties are tested, Lyla discovers that her presence in this world is no coincidence. She must unravel the mystery of her own bloodline, a power she never knew she had, and the reason she was brought here. In a world where love and sacrifice are intertwined, Lyla faces the ultimate choice: will she stay and embrace a future with Alaric, or return to the life she knew before Eryndelle's shadows consumed her?
Eryndelle’s Embrace is a tale of forbidden love, ancient secrets, and the pull between destiny and free will, where every step forward brings Lyla closer to the truth—and to a power that could either save or destroy them all.
In the mystical city of Verenthia, darkness looms as an ancient entity known as Malakar threatens to consume the world. Once a feared antagonist, Dorian Vex has spent years building his reputation through manipulation and treachery. But when whispers of an impending doom reach his ears, he realizes that power alone won't save him—or anyone else.
Teaming up with Elara, a rogue sorceress shunned for her dark magic, Dorian embarks on a perilous quest to confront the very darkness he once sought to control. As they delve into forbidden texts and ancient prophecies, they uncover the true nature of Malakar—a malevolent force that thrives on fear and despair.
Together, Dorian and Elara must navigate a treacherous landscape of betrayal, self-discovery, and the blurred lines between good and evil. As they confront their pasts and challenge the complacent Council of Elders, Dorian discovers that being a hero doesn’t require a pristine reputation; it requires courage, sacrifice, and the willingness to change.
In a world where shadows hold secrets and alliances can shift in an instant, can the most unlikely of heroes unite to save Verenthia from its impending doom?
Thanks for your kind words.. Wait till for the more chapters don't wanna spoil other ending for the story lol.
Velanora
Fantasy · Waqar_Ahmed_3614