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The group was in relatively good shape when they joined up with the caravan. They washed themselves and did their laundry, collected their belongings and gathered around a meeting spot, all riding their horses. There were already several horse carriages there, and a dozen of armoured guardsmen and free labourers.
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You can just tell that he gestured them.
"It's true. When I was younger (not that I am not young), I had my fantasies of how to make the world a better place. Now, whatever solution I come up with, whatever idea I have, I understand that it would take my whole lifetime to make a small difference. And worst of all, people would hate you because they don't get you. You could spend your whole life trying to pass a law that protects the mortals from cultivator abuse, for example, and the mortals would lynch you for a pat on the head from those that kill and rape them every day. How does one not get demoralised?"
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Rui Ming's father was explained to be amnesiac since he was Mistborn. Uncle Ti's sister called them amnesiac dimensional invaders. Yep (think there was even a separate paragraph mentioning this)
Foreigners tend to stick with each other. Islanders, white people, some weird looking tanned people — all Mistborn consider themselves one thing, separate from us, and hang out in their own corner of the tavern, gambling and drinking. Bet they wouldn't be so united if they had their memories back. Identity is relative, it seems.
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I don't answer such questions, sorry.
"Don't harass my customers, Black! Bad for business!"
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Dream randomly glazing a random side character with anime hair [img=proud][img=proud][img=proud]
The bodyguard felt humiliated, all his training and street status, but reduced to a simple thug by a rich grandma, and there was nothing he could do about it! He nodded politely and left.
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Eh, as a teacher, I think it depends on the student and subject. But it's often used as an excuse to be a shit teacher. Are people like Yu Ting and Huang Lingbo shit teachers, though? Up to the audience.
"Greetings. This lecture isn't meant to give you a rigid structure to follow, but to help you explore the options that you have. My philosophy is based on letting the students teach themselves, with the teacher just giving them the instruments." Everyone nodded in agreement, but Xin disliked this. Based on his previous experience with different mentors, he felt like this approach was one step away from slacking off and blaming the students for failing.
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In a crumbling realm of a long-dead immortal, in a forsaken corner of the universe, two souls cross paths. Xin is a burnout prodigy, living a solitary life as a hunter, until one day he sees his hometown levelled to the ground by a giant boar. Wu Lei is a street urchin, persevering through a lifetime of pain and abuse, forced into a criminal syndicate at a very young age. So different, yet so similar, they quickly form a bond, which will be tested over the decades to come. This is a dark, slow-burning tale of resilience and transformation. In a world where grand narratives are forged, not given, and shortcuts are carved, not found, Xin and Lei embark on a relentless journey of martial arts, cultivation and friendship, with its beautiful ups and painful downs. Author's note: 1. There are no cheat codes. The mcs are both talented individuals, yet they aren't the chosen ones. They don't belong to any prophecy or grand plot, and have to claw their way into relevance. 2. It's a psychological work at its core, and a coming of age story at that. The mcs evolve drastically, but naturally, and they will at times frustrate the audience. This is by design. 3. Everything is explained gradually as to not overwhelm the reader. Please have patience, every single type of cultivation will be studied in-depth. The plot also evolved past what it originally presents itself as. 4. This book is very edgy at times. I don't do things just to shock people, and I believe that every edgy piece of content I write has a reason behind it, but you have been warned. 5. I am an ESL author. I am constantly reading English literature and working on improving my writing, and I certainly get better as the chapters go on, but keep this in mind. 6. The narration style switching between first and third form is intentional, same for not using italics. It's not a quirk or a whim, but an experimental choice that will become very relevant in future chapters. https://discord.gg/Nvj7yPJr4q - my discord. New chapters, a backlog of 130 plus less edited chapters, shitposting.89 Chs 57 Colecciones
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In a slowly crumbling world of a long-dead immortal, two souls meet. Xin is a burnout prodigy, living a solitary life as a hunter, until one day he sees his hometown levelled to the ground by a giant boar. Lei is a street urchin, living a life of pain and abuse, forced into a criminal syndicate at a very young age. When these two meet, they are astonished by how similar and different they are at the same time, and a troubled friendship forms. This is a dark, slow-burning tale of resilience and transformation. In a world where grand narratives are forged, not given, and shortcuts are carved, not found, Xin and Lei embark on a relentless journey of martial arts, cultivation, and friendship, with its beautiful ups and painful downs. Authors note: When I say dark, I mean it. This is not a power fantasy book, although it has its payoff moments, and the mcs are meant to frustrate, to a degree. I'm answering all the comments and feedback on my discord, where I post early chapters (pre-release drafts). Please come join, I really value constructive criticism https://discord.gg/Nvj7yPJr4q Extra tags: Alchemy, Survival, Business, detailed fighting scenes, Psychological, Strong language. Little update: Editing and refining early chapters again, as my skils have improved since then. Tell me what you think. Hi RR, VulpesDenion is me37 Chs 16 Colecciones
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