Star_Ichor

I can tell your still a beginner because of the early chapters with the use of your writing style so i will give you. A pass on that the story overall is interesting and the characters are kinda inconsistent so maybe work on the characters a bit more the fights could be described better but its good The ending of volume one was a bit rushed though anyway its still a good read even though the grammar in some places are hard to get through its still a good read. I would love to recommend this to the people that want to read a story with alot of potential to grow and become better. For now i will give this a 4.5/5 this story is underrated and needs more readers other than that i fully recommend this book