I will say, I think I remember you saying something like their being 50 planned waifu's; that is way too much. Cut it down to 10 or under. Trust me, it will make it easier to expand on their characters and make them feel less like notches in Ash's belt.
I mean I just recently read this for the first time. I think the R18 stuff is a little forced, given their ages I would be more apt to read fluffy romances with a kind of 'fade to black' sex scene; rather than getting the explicit details. That said, I have overall enjoyed the fic so far. I'm looking forward to the Krabby fight as Kingler is one of my favorite Pokemon.
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Overlord: The Multiverse
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Remake: Just say you are going to be Harem king.
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I love all of your stories. They are all fun and not stupidly edgey like other fanfics. Which is important to me, because I read to be entertained not depressed.
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