TheGuyOfObscurity

TheGuyOfObscurity

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Greetings, Obscurity here.

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Posted

This story greatly describes the feelings, conflict, and appearance, also this book mixes with some anime elements and spells/skills. However, I saw there is something that confused me, sometimes the author uses "she/her" for Envi(system) but sometimes the author uses "he/him" for the system.

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Commented

Pov while Nao is fighting trolls :

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Replied to NAVIRUNAVIII

It’s called Zalgo text, it change your font to eerie style.

 "I am the destination of all things, the death, and oblivion, the Void, S҉̧̛̟̰̈̿̒͋́ͅc҉̢̱̦̥͓̠̌̋͠ḩ̴̦̮͓̆͂͂̽͡i̴̧͔̘̜̘҇͌̐v҈̬͕̲̄̊̕͢e̴̠̖҇̄̓̈̈́͢ŗ̴̦̲̙͗̀̚͡s̷̡̛͕͉̄̊͗z̶̮͙͇̎̒̒͢͠w̷͚̟̲̜̜͌͗̾̕͜e҉̞̖̯͚͒͋̈͌̀͜͡n҉͙͎̱͍̉̅̑̿̈͜͞ͅ." Void said with a majestic voice.

Secret of the Fog

Secret of the Fog

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Posted

It's a pity that there are not too many people reading this book, however I like it. Ugh... so what I want to say is... MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER MORE CHAPTER.

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Commented

I agree so freaking much [img=Smitten]

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Replied to RINNArinna

I pronounce it "fog" not "fag" before.[img=Smug]

TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Posted

Alright, it's a good novel that I can suggest to others. The plot is good and interesting, and the characters are well-shaped. As for writing, it's all good, described well, with good grammar that is easy to understand, while reading the words my brain imagines the scene instantly. That's all, nothing says now, so just keep it up! I'll support your novel.

TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Posted

Imma be Lin Fan’s dog so that he can teach me how to cultivate [img=Smug] Lin Fan’s character is well shaped, perfectly reflect how a weak person will do after got a strong power and greedy for many, authority and beauty. However, Lin Fan still gives some benefit to the people who submit to him. The obedient one get the reward, the disobedient one get… to the heaven. Keep it up, I’ll support you.

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
1 months ago
Posted

I prefer to read in paragraph form, it's quite hard to understand. However, the story is still great, well-explained and organized. So yeah, keep it up! you can do it!

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TheGuyOfObscurity
TheGuyOfObscurity
2 months ago
Posted

Author here, I want to revise the first ten chapters. It is not recommended to read this book before I have finished revising it. Pov : me when I compared my start with the start of other book….

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  • Secret of the Fog original

    Secret of the Fog

    Fantasy ADVENTURE R18 WEAKTOSTRONG DARK TRANSMIGRATION

    An unknown fog spreads all over the world. When the fog begins to appear scary monsters, unknown items, and chaotic songs, fear suddenly spreads to everyone like a virus. Now people realize...the world is divided by the fog...but At the same time, the fog can let you go to other worlds. Will you step into the fog to start your journey? I had no choice because the fog had already engulfed me. When I walked out of the fog, I found myself in a strange forest, full of bright flowers on the ground, many long black trees covering the rays of the sun, and ruins of a mythical white palace. This world has arcane elements, bizarre creatures, magical items, and even eldritch deities. I start my journey, maybe I can find the way back home, or live in this world.

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