Very good but the chapters should be longer.
What can I say man, this is probably the best fanfiction not only from Danmachi but in general from this site. Personally I really liked that you didn't give the protagonist the victory, and all the points you gave for doing so seem very correct to me, I don't want this story to become a generic one with a protagonist who overcomes all difficulties without breaking a sweat. In short:IS LITERATURE
Man... not to criticize but that character design looks like it was created by my 10 year old self who thought those types of characters were cool. It doesn't affect the story at all though, I'll just rewind my brain and imagine the protagonist looking any other way.
Since he has all those abilities like his fangs and those claws, what if at one point in the fight his halberd is destroyed? And then he has to fight like a real beast, but as a super savage, using his enhancement abilities and his regeneration to charge forward and just, I don't know, climb the damn Goliath and throw a big breath of fire through his mouth and burn him from the inside?
Cinema
Oh boy, we're back
Oh boy
Yep I'm gonna read this shit
Good👍
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original The first step is to be expelled from the academy.
I was reincarnated in a novel, yes, just as you hear it, but at least I was reincarnated as a handsome guy from one of the most important families in the empire; my life is already solved, right? I wish it was, the problem is that I was reincarnated as Arthur Reclesia, a useless bastard worthy of playing the villain who appears at the beginning to make the main character look good and then dies in a pathetic way, although if that was the only problem then it would be easy; just don't act like a jerk and that's it, but the Reclesia family I come from are not only traitors allied with the demons, but in the middle of the novel they are discovered and the whole family is massacred without leaving anyone alive. Damn, I didn't even finish reading the novel56 Chs 94 Colecciones
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I don’t care about the plot, I just want to sleep.
Apparently I was reincarnated in a harem fantasy novel I was reading, well, I'd better get stronger, so no one will bother me when I sleep. ** I don't know how to write in English, so everything will be done with a translator, if you see any grammatical error point it out and I'll correct it.38 Chs 15 Colecciones
I HATE YOU!!! (but take a power stone anyway).
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