Great plot, interesting characters, and dark but intriguing twists. It needs editing or beta reader to fix the real world chaotic writing in the beginning and wrong word usage: mourn/ moan, sign/ sigh, grin/grind, warp/ wrap, angle/ angel. The last 4 paragraphs of the previous chapter are inserted in the beginning of the next chapter; I find it annoying.Overall: I recommend this book, but user be aware of the slight issues that can be a mental stumbling block
Lol. I meant before, like how is Max connected to Nora since he made it seem like they talked about her ex. Or did he just overhear stuff at the diner/ campus and truly lives in his own fantasy. I was trying to figure out if he was a character I missed/ skipped overBut thank you for your reply and sorry for the misunderstanding
I think my reading retention has diminished, who are Alex and Max?
So far, I love it and cannot hardly wait to see how it all unfolds.
"Sleep with Fiscal. It will give you gains. Derivatrio's an ex. And Statute is boring in or out of bed."
Husband With Benefits
Urban · har_k
Husband With Benefits
Urban · har_k