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2023-07-09 Se unió France
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8 hours ago
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I saw the change in the image of the story, what's the ...

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3 days ago
Replied to Crazy_Stamp

Go to fanfiction net, there is a the whole story there. Name = Harry Potter - Three to Backstep. The first chapter on webnovel is like 1/5 of the first chapter on fanfiction net.

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Writing Quality (RQ) = 4/5 \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ Stability of Update (SU) = 4/5 \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ Story Dev (SD) = 1/5 (If i could i would put 0/5) \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ Character Design (CD) = 1/5 (If i could i would put 0/5) \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ World Background (WB) = 1/5 (If i could i would put 0/5) \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ As some reviews has suggested, YES, this story come from fanfiction net under the name of "Harry Potter - Three to Backstep" and it has 50 chapters, THATS IT. \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ The reason of WHY there is around 95 chapters on this webnovel version? Because the fanfiction version of the chapter 1, is at least 2/3 chapters on webnovel. That explain why the difference in number of chapter. \/\/\/\/\/\/\/ I don't know, if that person farm the view to make money are just wanted to re-post it here on webnovel (Not like the latter make sense since he could have just not multiple the chapter) But either way, go read it on fanfiction net, it's FREE there with not possibility to make you pay to read it. And the story is already finished anyway.

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You know, that's the reason WHY i always re-read the chapter i already finished writing in case i didn't see such problem.

Ritsuka just rolled his eyes, he didn't care he alreyd wanted drk touch them but he won't do, as he grabbed it, as then they were then transfer to different Domain, as Ritsuka closed his eyes, as she open he saw that it was a glaxy, but what would shock him he saw something that his eyes widened, as he saw hundreds no million of clones if Kama everywhere

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3 days ago
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Where "" to say someone is speaking?

Kama then looked at Ritsuka. Darling do you wanna do something.

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3 days ago
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On purpose* ?

As she then pushed him on thr couch, as Ritsuka saw it he saw her and even saw her chest moved, ignoring the laws of physic, which Ritsuka was sure that she did on purses, as Ritsuka just looked at the cheast, he really wants to touch than and even drink milk from it, well he was still a Teen boy.

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3 days ago
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Sign up* (I'm sorry, i'm that guy)

Ritsuka then woke up, the Singh up for Chaldea is in 2 months, so he has time for it, as for now he opens his eyes.

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Make me remember a manga where the MC had an "harem" of Yandere and was trying to survive in it.

Kama sighed as she recounted, "User No. 27 was an eccentric girl with peculiar tastes, while No. 54 was bizarre—why did he have so many yanderes? No. 64... let's just not talk about her; it's not pleasant. No. 73 was an unforgettable case, but not in a good way. And No. 99 was a wonderful woman who let herself be killed. Her death was such a loss that I destroyed her world in anger."

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3 days ago
Replied to 0Klein_amon0

That's a translation and the majority of translation on this website are from Chinese novel.

But what I didn't know was that a pair of curious eyes had noticed my little smile and were surprised by it.

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No worry, i write myself some fanfic (even if ALL of them are either not finished or just the idea of 2am.) so i can understand that when you write you don't really look for the best way for the reader to read.