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New Naruto fanfic where the mc is actually a part of suna. I haven’t really seen a fanfic where mc is from suna that isn’t a mtl novel. So far the grammar is proper, looking forward to it

Yeah the grammar is good

It’s finished now tho, just search up Marco and it should be the first fanfic. I remember reading one b4 also but don’t remember the name or if it’s still uploading

Interesting novel so far with good grammar and spelling. I like that you didn’t choose Marco and made your own character as whitebeards vice captain

One of the best game of thrones novels out there. So far it hasn’t had a big grammar issues or stuff of that sort and the story is unique intriguing. Continue the good work

A good game of thrones novel with proper grammar. This could be something that you will enjoy. Hope that you continue the series, it is pretty good author.

Great novel with good grammar and new point of view. Hope that you continue with the consistent uploads. The story is progressing at a good speed too.

Honestly a new and cool idea to the story is devil fruits. I haven’t read similar stories about devil fruits in the GOT world, and I think that this concept works well. Perhaps make it so that the Targaryens don’t get destroyed. And/or make it so that there are a few Noble houses with devil fruits because if a small house like “Mormont” has a fruit, I’d assumed they’d get attacked or killed to prevent the “threat”.

Honestly off to a decent start. I hope the bandages maybe are play a role in something and are not just for show. As for the grammar and spelling mistakes, I recommend using ChatGPT of Copilot (by Microsoft) and ask it to fixing some spelling/capitalization issues. Looking forward to the novel

Pretty calm story. Good change of pace and setting compared to the other novels you see out there. I recommend to try reading it and see if you happen to like it

Good novel concept however it needs more story building, it’s moving too fast in my opinion. I like the idea of cherry blossoms, perhaps make some moves inspired by Byakuya is Bankai from bleach.