Dozer_2600

The most probable possibility seeing that they were teleported. Tftc.

Tftc.

Tftc.

You need to work on describing things. We still don't know what Mc and his girl look like.

Why Mc wants to return so much when he has nothing but sad memories in his original world?

I know I know...It's obvious Mc is named Grey and it's a smut novel so ladies and gentlemen we will be reading 50 Shades of Grey...I must say that sorry. :)

Tftc.

I wonder if someone cursed Mc because he’s luck is so bad.

Tftc. But he could have better blood line. He has system that concentrates on lust in my opinion he have enough abilities like this and he could get something more interesting from his blood line. But it’s your book so hope that it will go in good way.

Is this Op Mc story?