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LokiStormHead
male LV 10Just a boy who likes light novels! Currently working on my own original: 'Benefits of Snitching'. If you're interested, then feel free to follow me in anticipation of the content release.
2023-06-18 Se unió Botswana
Story features typical misconceptions about feminism, main character is quite childish, antagonists are violent for no reason, and magic is vague and uninspired. I give this an average rating since it was still fun to read. Hopefully the quality goes up in future.
Remove the second "had".
Her father had been excavating gold from a perilous site and had needed to hide the operation. So, building an oil rig provided the perfect cover, and while it was under construction, the gold could be hastily extracted without arousing suspicion.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
Source?
It was always the damn trucks.
The Witch Hunter System
Fantasy · Pointbreak
Don't place a fullstop at the end of quotations if a dialogue tag will be utilised. Do this instead: "There's no need to be so humble, Miss Alice," responded Lucius.
"There's no need to be so humble, Miss Alice." Responded Lucius
Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
'Purity' 🚩🚩🚩
Yet, despite her enchanting figure, Lucius found it difficult to view her with lust, sensing an aura around her that proclaimed her purity.
Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
"As you know, Bob..."
"Even though we have dealt with demons many times and often cooperated with them, you should know how terrifying and devious their contracts can be. They are nothing but pitfalls! You already possess a set of exceptional talents, so there is no need to make a deal with demons like a desperate lunatic!"
Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!
Fantasy · NineSleepyDragons
💀💀💀
The pain in her vagina was an imprint I had intentionally left on her.
Villain Simulator
Fantasy · Autistically
Okay, it's very likely that the author is not good with English. But if that's the case, why hasn't he gotten a beta reader to help There are many people in the inkstone discord server who'd be willing to assist. The first chapter is a headache to read: odd punctuation, bad grammar. Hopefully, the author fixes it in future. But for now, I am giving it 1 star.
source?
That night I had a strange dream of Charlotte licking my face and smiling shyly while looking at me.
Villain Simulator
Fantasy · Autistically
Drawing quality is satisfying, and the plot is fun.
Girls, Magic, and Cultivators
· WebNovel Comics