great chapter, at first iImisreqd the title and thought it said frostlings
good start
great chapter, go for the trifecta harem of AZULA, KATARA AND TOPH. have Ryuk become the Genghis khan of ATLA
hey I enjoyed the chapter and am eager to read more. just a preference could you make Dontos main weapon something not a sword, maybe like a halberd?
story is great. no major problems for grammar. the MC id powerful but not super OP at the start. I am interested to see what happens 3 years before canon. the only problem this story has is that there are not enough chapters
i am eager to read more, the story seems disjointed at times but the grammar is good. I just hope that the MC does not become a pawn of Alfred
hey I am liking the story, do you have a Patreon where I can read more?
how is there bamboo in Georgia?
It took him several minutes before he finally found what he was looking for, a small cluster of bamboo.
TV · JLNarez
Octavia all the way
2: Octavia
TV · Bam729
i am enjoying this but there doesn't seem to be much difference in the storyline with the addition of tanjiros memory and abillities
TANJIRO THE NEW SPIDERMAN
Anime & Comics · Nikhil_Gautam_0503