oof still didn't post, the author's comment is the same as before for me no matter how much I refresh.
Your comment didn't post, or at least I don't see any comments yet.
Very satisfying payoff.
I suppose that makes sense. I just thought it would make for cooler lines than talking about not having any witnesses left tbh. Though I guess Bruno isn't one to care for cool points so carry on I guess.
Ngl zent you missed an opportunity for Bruno to have a brief monologue to the serbian general explaining what happened to that bosnian family at the hands of the serbian royals and their ilk and how that means the divine right to rule was lost by the serbian royal family and now they and the people of the capital will serve as an example of what happens to those who harm those around Bruno. I guess maybe that wouldn't make sense given that Bruno planned to kill the man from the start but it would've been a cooler set of lines than essentially just "I'll get away with war crimes if I kill you witnesses!".
Gotcha lol, I've just always heard the saying as "pride cometh before the fall" and thought you might've modified the wording just to spite me lol.
Be honest, did you change the title of this chapter just to spite me?
Bruno watching Serbs perish rn:
-"Cometh before the fall", huh?
Story has potential, keep it up!
Maids VS Apocalypse
Fantasy · Nomanalive