I appreciate the criticism, I went for a time skip because I felt that readers wouldn't react well if I did massive infodumps at the start of vol.2 but maybe trying to feed info while simultaneously keeping an action pace hurt consistency a little. Also I burnt out a little, that's why I took a break. Rest assured that when i resume regular updates in a couple weeks the framework will be much more thought out and I'll slow the pacing a little for vol. 3.
folklore is fascinating and a good way to make a world feel "alive", using familiar tropes in new ways, thank you!
You'll see the scaling in volume 2, Outcasts have an advantage over mages in that they can't be directly touched by mana but there's a lot of ways to fight them, I expand the power system there
amon has given everyone ptsd 😮💨
"Mr. Delacroix, I presume?" The man who entered was impeccably dressed; sharp suit, top hat and a monocle. He held a jewel engraved walking cane in his left hand. He extended his right hand, his eyes flicking around the room with a look of approval. "I'm James Whitmore. I've been eager to dine at your establishment."
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That's not a big risk for them as you'll see
Jane is very inexperienced in the field and ok the rest was a bit cliche but these exist for a reason.
Marcus is very sensitive to losing loved ones and Lucius clearly targeted Vicky, he stays on objective and trusts his team
there's a protocol about it that you'll see in a few chaps
short girls exist 😂
No I had to take a hiatus for health reasons, updates resume this month
Rise Of The Outcasts
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