Well looks like somethings didn’t go to plan I at least hope you’ll be coming back eventually and I hope you’re well
This is already more fun and interesting compared to the last contest
So. When is the next chapter coming out? I don’t want to sound rude it’s just been two weeks. so I was wondering if something come up in real life that stop you from writing. And I’m really enjoying the chapters so far.
SO true I completely forgot about that. And I feel like the author also forgets about parts of the plot/character details. though the only plot hole I can remember is the tournament was supposed to be run by different people. so I don’t know how common these plot holes are
[Do what exactly? They're not shouting, and Nixilei is more exasperated then anything. Plus, it's pretty obvious what everyone is going to do anyway. Green will be assigned the obstacle course because she did one back in the first tournament round and has wind affinity to help get across and stay on the platforms. Plus she might be better at open combat.]
D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad
Fantasy · Vongrak
Most likely she doesn’t know she’s never displayed being that observant. In order for her to noticed her eye twitches whenever she’s lied to she have to be constantly lied to so she would wonder why she been having eye spasms and then Lily would probably figure it out
Kat felt her eye twitch at that. She wasn't exactly sure why that happened, until she sneezed afterwards. Obviously it was the sneeze that's why. Oditr continued, "Well no that's not quite true. At least one of them was a perspective suitor of mine, but the other two weren't… or at least, I don't think they were. So I'm at a loss as to why they'd bother to lie about something like that. Sure having it is one thing… but being known for lying to the queen? That can't be a good look."
D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad
Fantasy · Vongrak
Something that sort of bothering me is that Lilith is always in the morally correct position it seems even though in her past life she was not a good person and even in her own thoughts she doesn’t seem like a good person but i can’t remember anything Morally deplorable she’s done. The worst she does is emotionally manipulate people and blackmail she hasn’t assassinated anybody she hasn’t murdered somebody who wasn’t already trying to kill her. especially because she’s trying to create a monster country you don’t create countries and seize power without stepping on and killing at least some good people granted her country is not really a country at this point unless she not trying to make country and instead she’s trying to mix human and monster society together and seize power in the already existing country but still my point still applies. When she gains more political and magical power and she still only manipulates and kills bad people I will find that unrealistic Anyways I’m really enjoying the series so far
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Something that’s been bothering me for a while wasn’t thyme only supposed to moderate one of these competitions? And in the rest of the tournament was supposed to be moderated by different people? Like I swear I remember reading thyme say that they couldn’t go as hard in the other tournaments because the other moderators aren’t as powerful as thyme or something along those lines Another thing that sort of bothered me is what happened to minor? They are still connected via the demon net work and should still be able to communicate to each other but we just haven’t heard anything from her? Also sorry for putting so many comments on this chapter
Sort of an iteration on the previous idea that was present in my other comment and that is to be summoned to a place where time works differently so that every time she is summoned a large amount of time passes between 10 and 100 years and she would be summoned by the same family over and over and over again so she would be summoned by there children and their children children. Also I wish I can edit my comments
But reverse grip is cool, looking and edgy…. but yeah functionally wise in real life never put your weapon in reverse grip
"So when I fold impure metal, they will actually be combined with each other because they are impure."
The Tale Of Kitsuna
Fantasy · TheRealSkollie