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DaoistvOzFLw
4 months ago
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not sure if author got lazy, but ending in the middle of a scenario is rather foolish. spoils the book. it's worse that ending on a cliffhanger. the translator did not even try to improve his skills. if anyone knows the author, please kick his head. you can't leave a story unfinished, unless you're dead, then someone else should take over. the synopsis hints at more, where is it. I'm rambling. the story is not bad per sé, just not original. as long as it keeps me reading.

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
4 months ago
Commented

I don't understand, if it twins, shouldn't it be plural. unless the author or translator is biased against the other child

It seemed that good-looking people have charm both in front of adults and children. Their unborn child was already showing a preference for the father.

Reborn in the Eighties as a Housewife with a Space

Reborn in the Eighties as a Housewife with a Space

General · Night in the Forest

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
4 months ago
Commented

sister

"Hmm, don't worry, little brother. I'll keep the promise I made to you. Just focus on studying and reading your books!" Qin Yu tore a piece of steamed bread and handed it to Qin Jiale.

Reborn in the Eighties as a Housewife with a Space

Reborn in the Eighties as a Housewife with a Space

General · Night in the Forest

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
4 months ago
Commented

shouldn't this be her hand

"Fifth Aunt, I got a letter from my sister. My sister sent a letter, haha!" Qin Jiale happily told Aunt Qin, waving the letter in his hand!

Reborn in the Eighties as a Housewife with a Space

Reborn in the Eighties as a Housewife with a Space

General · Night in the Forest

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
1 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
1 years ago
Commented

i also question the gender of Robinson. but more importantly, does Daisy have so many names. seems like everyone has a name for her. if i did not concentrate on that part, iIwould have been confused by the introduction of new characters that just popped up

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
1 years ago
Commented

sorry, the book might be good, but the translation sucks terribly. before putting up book for reading pleasure, please enssurethat the English readers can at least understand and follow the story. the translation does not do the story justice. totally dissapointing

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
1 years ago
Replied to saphirevirgo24

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My Wife is a Psychic

My Wife is a Psychic

General · Wuxia

DaoistvOzFLw
DaoistvOzFLw
1 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola