Sub0wins

11 months ago

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say a shiver went down his spine or his body went cold. something along those lines would be better

Panting in the air, tired from exhausting all of his Mana, he smiled in satisfaction. What he unleashed looked pretty awesome, so of course he would be happy. What would make him even happier was Natasha finally staying down. But as the risen dust was forcibly cleared with Wind Magic, his sweat ran cold. (A/N: Is that how it's said? Advise please.)

Lunatic Dragon

Action · That_One_Dead_Ali

Sub0wins

11 months ago

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TfTc

ch 27 CH 023: Training

Lunatic Dragon

Action · That_One_Dead_Ali

Sub0wins

11 months ago

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uhh spelling mistake

Slathilia, saluting :"Aye aye, caption."

Lunatic Dragon

Action · That_One_Dead_Ali

Sub0wins

11 months ago

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tftc

ch 29 ...Daddy?

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

Sub0wins

11 months ago

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this one fr

D.) KAME… HAME…

Balance: As It Should Be

Fantasy · I77OI3

Sub0wins

1 years ago

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TFTC ( why am i up at 2 am + W gods)

ch 14 First Request

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

Sub0wins

1 years ago

Commented

TFTC

ch 12 I Hit My Head

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

Sub0wins

1 years ago

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maybe in your other stories, ali would be kinda really really op guy that the mc can't defeat unless he wants to destroy the world. Or if you put another piece wouldn't he be like twice as much powerful or have twice as much potential as his other counterpart?