Yeah… just reread the whole thing and honestly, it’s the biggest flaw I think. Welp. I don’t plan to re-write. Let’s see how my writing style changes when I get back into the swing of things.
Meh, Semantics. His nutrition was so bad his body turned old
Indeed, the man sporting a dishevelled, overgrown beard was worried about having to pay delivery fees. As a failure by the standards of society, and an unproductive resource, the man spent the last five years without having stepped out of his sordid, little room. The only bit of exercise he ever got was walking to the door to receive his next batch of instant food. Hell, the delivery man probably got more exercise running away from the scene upon seeing the monstrous sight that was the decrepit old man.
Urban · K71Extra
Not the face for it lol. Could’ve practiced his Fem speak or bought a voice changer to be a Vtuber tho lol 🤣
Throwing his mangled controller at the screen caked in droplets of dried ramen broth, a 38 year-old middle-aged fat man raged at yet another loss in the game he was playing. That was the third loss in just a single hour, and it meant that the stellar record on the new account was crumbling right beneath his fingertips. Despite seeming of little importance, the account was a means to maintaining the grotesquely obese individuals livelihood. After all, he sold these accounts to fellow players, and earned a small amount of cash from each purchase.
Urban · K71Extra
One of the most engaging first chapters I have read in quite a while now! Good start!
This is not the diameter… it’s the rounded circumference. So it would make a cylinder shape not a distorted looking sphere as I think you’re imagining it to be.
[Reward 1: +1in Penis Length, +1in Penis Girth]
Urban · K71Extra
Haha, well I’ll also be including sons. I want to explore such a family dynamic.
[Impregnation: 100]
Urban · K71Extra
He was 38. But he died. And regressed back into his younger body.
And so, the little soul wondered it's way through the vicissitudes of space-time, on an undefined route as though an amalgamation of the freedom the being gave it, and the inconceivable breakthrough that the Almighty had just had within it's dao heart, toward the husk of an 18-year old's body.
Urban · K71Extra
Nope
And so, the little soul wondered it's way through the vicissitudes of space-time, on an undefined route as though an amalgamation of the freedom the being gave it, and the inconceivable breakthrough that the Almighty had just had within it's dao heart, toward the husk of an 18-year old's body.
Urban · K71Extra
Positive? Negative? That … scares me lol.
Funnily enough, I just began penning down the next chap to start publishing soon again :) stay tuned!
Sex Recompense System
Urban · K71Extra