Luka smiled. He'd only spent about half of his first Puma payment, and most of that was on his family. The rest would go into investments, savings… maybe some clothes?
Luka Zoric
Sports · AmSincere
you need grammarly. got potential, but hard to read
it's so rushed
When "Shape of You" was released, it skyrocketed to the top of the charts, just as Quincy had predicted. The song was a perfect blend of pop and rhythm, its catchy hook making it an instant hit across radio stations worldwide. Critics hailed Quincy as a rising star, praising his musical instincts and his ability to create hits that transcended genres.
Son of The King of Pop
Celebrities · Hyuga_Tobirama
Writing like football players only reacts to you if you are a certain race. This is football, my guy. No one underestimates a player due to race. Age, yes, not race. It's impossible to read this without feeling cringeworthy. How its so forced into the story.
author seems to believe everyone is racist towards Indians.
kinda getting repetitive
your pt way too high
you still need to pay tax end of year
Luka smiled. He'd only spent about half of his first Puma payment, and most of that was on his family. The rest would go into investments, savings… maybe some clothes?
Luka Zoric
Sports · AmSincere