Love the story so far but there is only one thing to criticise and that’s the constant bold writing. It’s very jarring and distracting. It takes you out of the immersion a bit
No. I’m too used to trash, real trash that this just cannot be compared to trash. Could it be better? Sure. My expectations for web novels are just lower than yours. Sine you have very high standards for character growth and emotional scenes, you won’t find many that will meet your expectations. I genuinely wish you luck
I quite enjoy it. The only thing I don’t like is that there are too few chapters and not enough updates. You seem like the kind of guy who likes non stop action. Unfortunately, you should look elsewhere.
I figured making Magneto live as a powerless human would have been much sweeter than simply killing him.
This novel had such incredible potential. Unfortunately is has been ruined beyond hope with atrocious grammar. It is a waste that this work has been contracted because I don’t know how anyone could bring themselves to pay for it. People don’t pay for Mtl, at least not that I know of. It could be so simple just to edit it and make it a supreme grade novel. Idk what is wrong with this author.
She takes up two spots. It said that
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Apocalypse Descent: Farming with My Harem
Games · A Little White Snake
It isn’t. It affected way too few people. It was not a global catastrophe, since it didn’t affect most people worldwide. To consider it a true global catastrophe, it just weakens the meaning of it.
In this sudden catastrophe, cities were destroyed, and millions were slaughtered. The City of Celephais, one of the first cities hit by the monsters, was reduced to ruins almost overnight.
Online Game: I Started with Max Charisma and Caught the Goddess's Eye
Fantasy · Whisk92
I wonder if Luke would be able to grow stronger somehow due the demons or killing them
For Enid to enter a relationship with Luke, she will have to get a lot closer to Wednesday and have the friendship they were always meant to have. This is a good start. It’ll take no less to get Wednesday to do something THAT nice and crazy.
Loving this novel can’t wait for more
Kol Mikaelson-The Wild Original
TV · ItachiWeasel