please just die or something
" You want to avoid any trouble with the Church, and rubbing the fact that you have a survivor from their Secret-Dark-Inhumane-Experiments isn't really a good way to do it. So you want me to change my name Temporarily or Permanently and use that knowledge at the opportune time to get the most benefits from them " I deadpan at her
DxD: ReKiba
Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
The story is entertaining, but the protagonist doesn't think much. I don't say this in her capacity as a character, but as a narrator. She doesn't ask questions of any kind, she doesn't make theories, she doesn't think about his past or the future, Any problem that occurs to her does not last a paragraph. This is most noticeable when she meets the Elf. She basically shuts off her brain. Adventurer's Guild? New city? Other races? Is magic common? What about the thousand-year-old flower I left behind and never spoke of again? Nothing, she doesn't think about anything. That's my main problem, but there are others like The status screen appears too much, there is basically no real dialogue beyond two sentences and "we talked for a while";The same goes for fights. In short, it can be a fun read, but you have to turn off your brain a bit because otherwise you will spend half the novel asking the questions that the protagonist should be asking.
AFO: "Ahh...my Exorcist Quick that I haven't used it since the Heian era."
I like that it slows down the pace a little so you can think properly about what you want. At this rate it seemed like he would run out of things to do after becoming strong enough.
A/N: Akira is finally lowering his walls a bit and letting others take a peek into a bit of his heart, and how much this one conversation mattered to Akira will be revealed later. What did you think about this chapter? I would love to know.
Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
Oh Ouuuu is it time to see Domain Expansion in action?
Let's see how this progresses. Basically I'm not a fan of the protagonist because it seems to me that everyone who thinks Sakura is useless hasn't seen the anime. However, as long as the "Sakura hater" thing is not recurring then it will be fine. So far it seems that she is perfectly justified in her worries to me, sacrificing a few years of childhood doesn't matter if it guarantees your future security. Nice chapter.
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"He promised to teach me Fire Style, but he postponed again," Sasuke said under his breath stubbornly, his disappointment evident. Itachi always does this to me.
Gojo Satoru: Reborn as an Uchiha
Movies · ricardo_yammouni
I'm sure Naruto wasn't one to two years old in that scene, so you screwed something up with the timeline.
Satoru leaned over, skillfully catching a mask about to hit the blond boy's face. The few remaining, who hadn't dispersed, looked at the blindfolded boy approaching the demon fox, sparking a flurry of discussions.
Gojo Satoru: Reborn as an Uchiha
Movies · ricardo_yammouni
And that's all a normal, boring and flat character...or is it? After all, it wouldn't be normal not to have more depth than that, wouldn't it?
Leaving aside the protagonist's reaction (which makes no sense considering he spent days doing nothing, but that's another topic). It wasn't bad. My biggest problem is that you can perfectly remove all the PoV that isn't the protagonist and nothing changes, they are superfluous.
VECTOR IN DC
Anime & Comics · Maverick_DaSupreme