Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212

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Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
3 months ago
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The first impression I got was that you don't proof read your work. If you do then you really need to improve on your diction. No offence meant but bad grammar makes it difficult to follow the story.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
4 months ago
Replied to Shodiya_Boluwatife

Thank you, much appreciated 🙏.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
4 months ago
Posted

Everything about this book is on point. It is well punctuated with a beautiful story line. The plot is unique and a credit to the authoress. I love everything about this it. Well done authoress on producing an outstanding work of art.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
4 months ago
Replied to Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212

Hi Emmanuel. Whenever you are write something in your vernacular language, it will automatically be underlined with a red line. That's because your computer's software is not designed to read non European languages. So don't worry about it. Just make everything else that is in English is spelt correctly and uses the correct tense.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
5 months ago
Replied to Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212

May you can also review my book. Below is the link, Interdimensional, a starship trilogy link https://www.webnovel.com/book/interdimensional-a-starship-trilogy_28387111008851405

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
5 months ago
Posted

I feel you have a good story, actually an amazing story to tell. If only you can improve on your grammar as well as proof read your word before publishing, it will go a long way to enhancing readers enjoyment.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
5 months ago
Replied to chaoslord

Thank you for the recommendation Chaos lord. I apptreciate the support.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
5 months ago
Posted

Very detailed descriptions. I find the plot very unique and gives a fresh feel to the transmigration genre .

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Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
5 months ago
Posted

It gives me great pleasure to present to readers worldwide an unforgettable reading experience. So join on an epic adventure unfolding across several alien worlds dimensions, and timelines. I should warn you in advance that when you start reading this book, you won't want to put stop. I wish many moments of happy reading. Enjoy.

Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212
5 months ago
Replied to Prinxy

Thank you for the support. I promise you regular updates will be forthcoming.

  • STARSHIP original

    STARSHIP

    Sci-fi ACTION ADVENTURE MYSTERY

    4.48

    A massive rip in the fabric of space and time leaves Space command's deep space fleet stuck on the other side of the rift. Meanwhile alien ships from another dimension arrive on Earth en masse on the other side of the divide. Captain Maguire, a decorated graduate of the Space command academy, whose unorthodox approach to duty is also his strength in a desperate bid to defend commands his starship the Sandawana into the rift in a desperate bid to defend Earth. Arriving on Earth he initiates the counter attack to repel the alien ships from Earth. Other starships of Space command's deep space fleet arrive on Earth to support the Sandawana's fight against the alien ships. Under the vicious barrage of lasers and missiles from Space command's deep space fleet, the alien ships begin to withdraw to their own dimension. But as they retreat the aliens launch a ground operation and take a senior Space fleet officer captive. Captain Maguire is forced to pursue the aliens taking the fight to their home world.

    52 Chs 31 Colecciones

  • FALL TO RISE original

    FALL TO RISE

    Urban

    Young Luckson Lungu's world is turned when his parents are killed in a tragic car accident. Thrown out of school for not paying fees and thrown out of the company house, to make way for his father's replacement and his family, Luckson's life seems to be falling apart. Left alone to face the harsh realities of life without anyone to take care of him at a tender age, his world fast spiralling out of control. His late parents relatives who would often visit when his parents were still alive magically melt away like the snow in summer, once their relatives pass away. Lucky is taken in by a band of street kids, led by the lanky boisterous Samson(17) who provides leadership to the other boys. Luckson is arrested during a robbery involving the other boys. As Luckson's life seems to be fast descending out of control he gets a much needed when he meets, Father Michael. The friendly catholic priest, instantly recognizes the greatness in Luckson and helps him make use of a God given talent to as it were rise like a phoenix from the ashes of a broken life and change his fortunes.

    21 Chs 1 Colecciones