MichaelDemiurgos

MichaelDemiurgos

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MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Commented

He could just asked for omnipotent's right there , which is solo possessed by his soul and that would have been great .

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MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Commented

No bro please .

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MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Commented

Why not just give him omnipotent as he is a boundless teir person , you wouldn't have to write so much abilities of the mc . And please make the MC that doesn't have system . It would be amazing that way . I personally am just to tired of All giving system when mc himself can to it all by himself . It doesn't change a thing but only make the mc lazy and weak without his so called loyal system .

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MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Replied to IDontCare

Thanks bro

MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Replied to IDontCare

Bro , I suggest you make a person reincarnated as Archangel Michael ( with his power's being the power's of Michael from DC or the supernatural TV show ) . Moreover , you could send the mc to anywhere in the multiverse or any other verse you want to . It would be a good start that way . Additional , make your story a little complex and write alot more in the chapter and also explain the character's more deeply which would make the story more realistic that way .

MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Replied to whitebear2123

okay

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MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Commented

Helel is a good name too .

MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
MichaelDemiurgos
1 years ago
Commented

Please change his name to something cooler . You could also name him as Lucifer it self or Noah