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Do his rival like that* also full blooded uchihas means we can bring back the uchiha clan....

Bro, theres still hindu or indian language in this, and the faces and emoji make this story significantly worse.

You should post character portraits here as well as some of us are reading on modible and cant view sentence comments, only chapter comments.

I think usually this author does... but they started acting like an amateur author in this chapter...

EEngrishhhhh????

Uhhh... ive read this one before...

He should get his revenge and then move on and forget them. No revenge is better than a live well lived and completely forgetting them after he gets hos revenge.

0 out of ten so far. Anytime you show us ntr, wether its normal ntr or netori, im gonna leave negative comments and 1 star reviews(assuming your like other authors and keep removing low ratings.)

Misspelled initiated as initiaded several times this chapter

"A Breton character pairs well with players looking to balance mage craft and combat. They are the most magically adept race in Skyrim, apart from the Altmer"

Lifespan is not an issue in a world where vampires and the cure for vampirism simultaneously exist. Just become a vampire at night or for the weekends and then cure yourself and youve effectively doubled or at least increased lifespan by 30%... which would be more than enough time for you to become a strong enough mage to enter the psijic order and become immortal.... and then you just have the become a leader or the leader of the psijic order to suddenly have dozens to hundreds of immortal mages to join your group carrying out the will of "robert"...

God already sd he was increasing magical talent of our mc... if i remember right there is a human race that specializes in magic.... if he just picked that, his starting talent in magic would probably be higher than any elven race and he wouldnt have to worry about the racists of skyrim... which is a large portion of the population...

What trash. So in the end your gonna fight an ntr system with an ntr system since netorare and netori are both ntr. Pathetic.

I think thats going a bit far....he didnt even know what he did was wrong.... this is like sending a 4 year old to jail for shooting someone.... or the victim shooting him back... its a bit much.....

Shame. You ruined it on the first chapter with the sentient system....