brother please read the comments and work on them. we can find inconsistency in writing which is not good. Try to rectify the mistakes and keep up the good work.
ok brother
brother where is the system gone. Try to bring it back on occasions like winning something or scoring the most runs... maybe reward him with a new shot or a new idea or something by saying that the system was upgrading or something. looking forward to more chapters. keep up the good work bro
are you going to update the stories or not. you did not give any reasons for stopping to update new chapters. is everything ok.
why are there three scenarios for the same thing everytime. can't you just stick to one...
unexpected but welcome gift of chapters brother. thanks for this and happy lohri and makar sankranti to u n ur family.
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TFTC BRO
brother where are the new chapters...
thanks brother
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