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Stardreamer12
LV 3Hello there! Welcome to my profile. I am an avid reader and I absolutely love getting lost in the world of novels, manhwa, manhua, manga, and comics. Whenever I get the chance, I spend my free time indulging in my favorite books and series.Apart from reading, I also have a soft spot for animals, especially cats and dogs. Their playful and loving nature never fails to bring a smile to my face. I always find myself drawn to them and can spend hours petting and playing with them.Lastly, I have a passion for writing poems. There's something about expressing my thoughts and emotions through words that feels incredibly fulfilling. It's a creative outlet that allows me to express myself freely and connect with others in a meaningful way.
2022-10-17 Se unió Global
Firstly, I would like to say that I enjoyed your story. It was well-written with vivid descriptions and good dialogue. The book had a nice flow to the story, and I particularly enjoyed the characters, especially Luiz. Keep up the good work, author
Your story was excellent! Your vivid descriptions of the scenes helped me to visualize the world you created, and the natural dialogue between the characters kept me engaged throughout. Your writing style is fantastic, and I found the characters to be well-developed and relatable. The plot was intriguing and kept me hooked until the end, and the background information you provided added depth and richness to the story. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your book and would love to see more from you in the future. Keep up the great work, author!
I find the story to be interesting and engaging. The concept of the protagonist becoming a terminally ill extra in a novel, and her attempt to maintain her character while dealing with her illness, is captivating. The addition of a system adds an intriguing element to the plot. The scene with the elites and the prince effectively sets up the protagonist's struggle to fit into higher society, and her sudden illness adds tension to the story. Overall, the author is doing a good job, and I look forward to seeing how the plot develops.
Your story was an absolute delight! The plot flowed seamlessly, and the characters underwent such captivating development. Your writing style is superb, and your command of the English language is impressive, allowing the reader to become fully immersed in the story. It's no wonder that I found myself utterly hooked from start to finish. I am eagerly waiting for more updates and can't wait to see what you have in store for us next
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Your story was really good! Your writing style is captivating and makes it easy for the reader to understand the story. Your descriptions are vivid and the dialogue is perfect. I especially like how you portrayed the two princesses, Estella and Elesha. Your portrayal of them was great! I also appreciate the creative idea of using Princess Elesha as a substitute for her sister's marriage.
Okay, so I like your story, especially the idea that the protagonist is the only remaining Nascent bloodline. You have a nice plot and a good theme. Chapters 1 and 2 are already okay since you've put a lot of description and enough dialogue between the characters, making the reader really know what's happening. However, in Chapter 1, I feel like it lacks dialogue and relies too much on descriptions. So, I suggest that the author writes more dialogue to balance it out. Your story is good, so keep it up, author
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In my opinion, the synopsis has a promising premise, but it lacks sufficient detail about the characters and their world. The final question posed in the synopsis is too general, and a specific conflict or event could make the story more engaging. Additionally, the dialogue at the beginning of the synopsis could be improved to feel more natural and realistic. The exchange of "Sis, let's stay together forever," and the immediate agreement of the other sisters feels forced and lacks depth. To make the story more engaging and realistic, I suggest adding more details about the characters, their relationships, and their specific conflicts.
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original Sweet Intention
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In a world where love and romance are considered the norm, she stood out as an exception. The girl, with her independent spirit and resolute beliefs, never found herself swayed by the charms of love. She was content with her solitary existence, until the thought of living the rest of her life alone crept into her mind. Desperate to find a solution, she turned to unconventional means to fulfill her desire for a child. With the help of a sperm donor, she was able to conceive and carry a child on her own. But just when she thought she had everything figured out, fate had other plans. Enter the most dangerous but incredibly handsome devil of a man she had ever laid eyes on. Despite her best efforts to resist his magnetic allure, she found herself drawn to him like a moth to a flame. Little did she know, their meeting was no mere coincidence, and their paths were destined to cross. What follows is a tale of unlikely love and an unconventional family, where the protagonist must navigate the complexities of relationships, parenthood, and the supernatural. Will she succumb to the devil's charms and embrace the love she never knew she needed? Only time will tell. Cover is not mine. credits for the rightful owner.7 Chs 18 Colecciones
i like historical fiction and I also like the way you described the background of the characters, it was perfect. The author provided vivid descriptions of the scenes that allow the reader to see the story unfold before them. Honestly, I can't find any mistakes in your story, so good job on writing it. I truly enjoyed reading it
Diabolic Occult Of The Forsaken
Fantasy · eudine