the quality isnt the best here and i will prob update all of my stores allat so go read them again ;)
remember, this is during war times they need the extra man power so if someone has the ability they can graduate early
not my best work its under heavy maintenance
" to think the third hokage would give me the notes of the second hokage is crazy " kayomi said while smiling to himself, within the notes there was the flying thunder god technique aswell as impure reincarnation technique, I wanted to ask for the scroll it self but i dont think he would give it to a 6 year old. nonetheless with the notes I can use it to create my very own flying thunder god technique.
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I believe his grandmother cares for him after his parents' death, but you're right ninja clans would definitely not dump all there children in some random orphanage
maybe spice it up with bleach atlest you're insides while be clean
[ Lack of sleep with poor diet has Caused the weakening of the immune system thus with over consumption of alcohol has caused liver failure ]
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Rip, there goes my ego, absolutely right. That is some large plot hole. there any other mistakes you find?
The strength of the inuzuka clan comes from there ninkin which they bound from birth but as a orphan I have no parents which would help me find my ninkin or companion but there are plenty of different ways to grow stronger so to train the already sharp senses i've been seeking into a nearby forest to sharpen them more and learn some survival skills
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using u is a bad habit of mine i will work one it :> and thanks for the tip brooski
Getting curious obito asked * does it give u special abilitys like the sharingan? *
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appreciate the tip i will try and use it next time :P
he's young, so the limit was 30 clones, but as he trains, his chakra coils expand, allowing for monsters chakra
He assigned 10 clones to read the books he borrowed from the library whilst 10 would practices the leaf sticking exercise the rest would try and find him a suitable taijutsu
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original (naruto fanfic) The beast of war
-[ note ] Im writing this so as to improve my abilities and knowledge as a writer so any Criticism and tips are welcome hope u enjoy this fanfic takes place around the same time as the during the thrid great ninja war do u think our mc will survive? follow our mc as he walks the path of a ninja and explores his brand new world will he learn cool ninjutsu and stop madara and the akatsui? find out as u read this story11 Chs 113 Colecciones
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reborn as a wolf ( Evolution )(on break)
A typical story of a reincarnation as a wolf bla bla it's all too simple, OR IS IT? read to find out on reborn as a wolf will it be interesting or complete an utter trash?? - authors note - this is my very first novel, so I'm not that good, but please give feedback on the story7 Chs 16 Colecciones
thank you for the tip i will try it out
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