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My question about the video is it looks like someone was there recording it and if someone was able to record the murder why didn’t they help and how is it that they sent a video with an unknown contact on the advanced school scroll. I hope this doesn’t become a plot hole. Also thanks for the chap

Thnx fot chap

i like how he struggles to not forget who he is and despite what he say about his past he doesn’t want to forget. Also Thanks for chap

Thanks for chapter, and i like that he is going to have connections and interest with other characters, most other stories have the mc never wanting contact with the main cast.

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Thanks for the chapter

his power reminds me of best jeanist from my hero and the gauntlet reminds me of spidermans webshooters. Also I really enjoyed the story can’t wait for more.

I really liked how you described his sadness over his favorite novel just up and ending and how he was in a state of denial for over a year thinking it’s not over.

That sucks what a bummer

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I am really glad that you are continuing the novel thanks

Thx for the cappy

I really love the way you portray there emotions especially asariah it feels tangible and realistic the interactions.

One of the things i like is the vocabulary you use to describe stuff

Thanks for the chapter after a while

I am not a big fan of the part where he talks to the imaginary readers but as long as its not over used it can be good. Also i like how poe challenges the vikings idea of revenge

I really like how it shows his sense of alienation that he feels from being in a different world and a different body. The way you describe him makes him seem so real.