Man that's too fast, I mean we didn't get to see many encounters between Alice and Michael for their relationship to progress and understand their feelings for each other which feels like being forced. Also the date could have been memorable if we got to see the dialogue exchange between Alice and Michael but all we read was the author's monologue.
It was supposed to be Asher's memory like Asher's pov, then how come there's memories of other characters that's confusing and dragging.
I think the numbers get confusing regarding scrolls, fragments etc, instead of mentioning them every time focusing on the story can be great. The relationship between Michael and his family is delicate(as Michael grew up with only his brother, his feelings and sadness)so it needs to be tread carefully and little by little if possible so the story feels natural(Everything that he achieved till now is with his own effort so he needs to move on from his family -this is just my personal opinion ).
Story development is great and the story is still in early stages. But the female character development is lacking and feels like stepping stones for MC(one of them unlocked his magic circuit, one gave him confidence,one will strengthen his legacy), they can be much more as the Female characters are unique and play a vital role in the story. Also please don't Make our MC to have more than 5 wives otherwise the promise will have no value.Thank you for the great book,Best wishes❤️
He was betrayed again and again by friends and comrades but our mc is still naive even after one death. I guess he needs to die a few times more to gain a bit more sense to not trust someone unknown but damn the drama is too forced and it feels like only mc is fated to be wrecked so we can sympathize with mc. The start was great but right now the plot is kind of repeating and you can guess who is going to backstab who, That is not surprising anymore. Kind feels like I am complaining here but I still hope things are going to get better. 😇
The progress of the main plot is too slow. Not even two months have passed but we are almost in chapter 440 and too many things are happening everyday in accordance to story timeline. Not to spoil but after the end of the discussion in chapter 385 with Natasha the story didn't even progress for almost 50 chapters. The Dream realm arch is kind of boring. [img=angry]
The Story was good at the beginning but now it's just the Authors monologue. Lack of interaction between characters, the author is focusing more on soul star and soul star fragments, I mean who cares about reading numbers.
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