I was talking in general
Jareth is 28 years old, and Aiza, Mark, Allen, Risa, etc. are all only 18 years old this year. Therefore, Jareth considers them to be children.
Fake Professor, Misunderstood As Strong
Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
Thanks for your feedback. I can tell this fanfiction has influenced you on a very deep emotional lvl. So, good for you. I myself am not really interested enough to go back and reread the story just to refute your points whether they are about the ff or they about my personal life.
Its pretty interesting so far. I like the concept of manipulating emotions. Its pretty unique. I just don’t like alot of what the mc goes through, like i can understand torturing your mc physically and such, but humiliating him is such a nono from me at least. just give him a break man. Btw i have a question author. did you outline your story and such or do you just write as you go ?
Ugh accumulating frustrating trop upon frustrating trop now are we ?
Thankfully, I was the only one aware of Etherwave. I could place the blame for his death on the monsters here. Perhaps even hide the traces of the threads...
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
author you keep puffing the mc and inflating him in such a grandiose way that doesn’t befits his actual capabilities
.....He was afraid of me.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Why should he be intimidated just from locking eyes ? mc isn’t that strong to intimidate even with his emotion magic
He soon started to grow uncomfortable with my gaze. So much that his eyes started to dart away from me.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
author , i am starting to think you like to humiliate your mc
The cavern shook all of a sudden. Unable to keep it steady, I lost my footing and fell against the ground.
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
lol he treating you like a btch lmao , I mean you are but dont let him treat you like that lol
"Just make sure you listen to me. It'll do all of us good."
Advent of the Three Calamities
Fantasy · Entrail_JI
Just accept dude you suck at this, better put this much effort into starting a business, you would be rich
"I will see you guys again, tomorrow." sounds better in my opinion
"...I will see you guys tomorrow again," Leo said as he started to walk away, ignoring the annoying sympathetic gazes directed towards him from other visitors.
Path of the Extra
Fantasy · Crypthh