Ui BEAM!!
Ability: Solar beam
Naruto-The secret sage
Anime & Comics · loskro
a good concept but too much sex and too op from the start for my taste.
... Tajuu kage bunshin no jutsu
Mito: (smiling) It is the Shadow Clone Jutsu—a technique that harnesses your chakra to create multiple copies of oneself. With your talent and dedication, I have no doubt you will master it with ease.
Naruto: Whirlpool Chronicles (DROPPED)
Anime & Comics · Teru_zZz
ino-shika-cho
Hoka replied, "The Nara-Yamanaka-Akimichi squad, the Kiri squad of that guy who asked whether we can kill, the Ame squad, and the all Hyuga squad got Earth squads."
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
A good story, truly, but I don't like where it is going, heed my words, you have a great skill, there is no issue. Just my own opinion, I don't like the present yet cherish the past, but wont'tbe there in the future. A very good story while my interest in it lasted, for me. Good luck.
he dead
PD: forgot to mention, do not mix too many anime together, focus on one and maybe two. that makes less variables and easier to imagine the outcome, that said so, I have to mention that you have no idea of the power scale of the anime or lack the necessary information, improve in that and good luck.
It's a good story but not much my taste with letting the readers choose some of the settings for this story. You write for yourself, not to please your readers, that is optional. You must love the story before your readers, that is what makes stories special, as doing as you like lets the world and your imagination flow without having to consider the thoughts and opinions of other people than yourself.
for when is the continuation?? There are so many good things in this story, maybe refine more about concepts, and it can be grater. Im still waiting though
the author must have deep pockets to repair it...
I could entertain you with a monologue about myself, meditating and seeing my life from another perspective now that I have no emotions, but it sounds very boring
I am the son of Simon Petrikov (An adventure time fanfic)
Anime & Comics · Dagon_vcg