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Ed_bear
Ed_bear
4 hours ago
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First???? YAY

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
1 days ago
Commented

Nope not weird at all cuz if I'm being honest I'm Thai but my family moved to England to live with my dad and well skip a few years forward and I've completely forgotten how to speak Thai and now I don't quite know what to speak to my mum about so I eventually just end up asking what's for dinner and also how she's doing and that's about it and it sucks cuz it ends up feeling to me that I'm some how scared to talk to my mum.

We Singaporeans talk about food, okay? It's just that I don't have the chance to do it with all the training. (Not sure about other Singaporeans, but at least for my family, we would occasionally discuss what to have for dinner. In the morning. Either that or my family is weird.)

Unexpected Incarnate (RWBY Ozpin Incarnate SI)

Unexpected Incarnate (RWBY Ozpin Incarnate SI)

Anime & Comics · RGQC

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
2 days ago
Replied to uphos

For REAL

AN: To be honest, I didn't like this chapter, and I was tempted to not upload it. Maybe it's because there's too much lore at once. The revelation regarding the World Tree will be paid off later, but I'm guessing a lot of you will see where I'm going with it. The idea is to show a bit that even after everything, assuming that the Light and Dark are gone, that the threat of the muggles discovering them is over, that people will still find a way to fight each other, and that society will always have conflict. I don't think I quite pulled it off, so, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
3 days ago
Commented

WWWWOOOOOOOOOOOO

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
3 days ago
Replied to Grim_Ignotus_LWG

The god of time cronos sos suck at spelling

AN: This chapter was surprisingly hard to write. I didn't know how challenging it would be to write characters from the future without really spoiling about how the story would end. Still, I found that Harry basically intimidating the kids to submission was on point with his character, even if it wasn't exactly nice. I know some of you will ask what happened to Harry in the future, like why none of the kids knows him personally, etc… Don't worry, I'll address it in the next few chapters. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
3 days ago
Commented

My guess is that he will do something like the first black since I suck at spelling so I cant spell his name

AN: This chapter was surprisingly hard to write. I didn't know how challenging it would be to write characters from the future without really spoiling about how the story would end. Still, I found that Harry basically intimidating the kids to submission was on point with his character, even if it wasn't exactly nice. I know some of you will ask what happened to Harry in the future, like why none of the kids knows him personally, etc… Don't worry, I'll address it in the next few chapters. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
6 days ago
Replied to Juhiko

with that profile pick... I chuckled haha

"If I can craft a potion that lets a fish grow human legs, then by using certain herbs from the forest, I can invert the potion's properties—merging a human's legs into a beautiful tail and granting them the ability to breathe underwater.

The Wizard of Fairy Tale World

The Wizard of Fairy Tale World

Anime & Comics · Lord_Hastur

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
8 days ago
Commented

RUNNNN IT'S A BRITT.... Wait I'm British too *goes and grab my won knife* Right bring it brove!

I Know where you live 🧐, don't forgot to leave your power stones if you don't want me knocking on your doors 🗡️🗡️🗡️

Avatar: The gamer

Avatar: The gamer

Anime & Comics · xXTheDarkOneXx

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
10 days ago
Commented

Hey author not sure if this is possible but couldn't harry like sing a realm into existence make a prophecy in that realm then brake it? It sounds stupid but could it technically be possible?

AN: This was not my greatest work, to be honest. The previous chapter took a lot out of me, and this gave me a bit of a breather. I know that some of you are sick of Neville and Hermione, but I wanted to close the chapter on their storyline pretty much. I won't do a chapter with the break-in to the Department of Mysteries since it'll probably be pretty boring. I won't spend more than a chapter or two on this. Anything more would be overkill. Anyway, on the Ragnarök front, Harry finally has a working plan. That's what that last part is about (Sorry not spoiling more than that). As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Ed_bear
Ed_bear
12 days ago
Commented

My thoughts over all for this story is that you ARE a great writer and sure theres parts that do anoy me but then again there's parts of my own stories that anoy people so as some who who has tried writing a story before you my friend have greatly surpassed me and in my opinion many others especially considering that like you said this is for your entertainment and that you don't want it to turn into a job but the fact that 1 you listen to your comments and are actively improving while still having to work a job is amazing. Also lets face it the fact that people complain about the she or he problem are just annoying like seriously you've said that English isn't your first language yet they still complain and yet also read other stories were the grammar is even worse is just being stupid and I should know considering I've read trashy Chinese translated novels but I don't complain considering 1 I don't have the time of day to complain and 2 I KNOW how hard it is to write a story were everything is perfect but I'm more of a reader then an actually writer, anyway I have to go soon so I'll just say this. THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL STORY and even if its once a month or something I hope you will still choose to continue but in the mean time I hope you stay healthy and well.