geekieme

geekieme

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geekieme
geekieme
13 days ago
Commented

Don't you think he was behaving way too immature for 25 year old. Like he got regressed but shouldn't he still have the mind of an adult yet he's acting so flustered

"Huh…. O-Oh Hi! I'm Z-Z-Zack Payne!" Zack 

Parkour System

Parkour System

Fantasy · Alejandro_Montas

geekieme
geekieme
1 months ago
Commented

Is this dropped

Este libro ha sido eliminado.
geekieme
geekieme
2 months ago
Posted

Nice story. Please don't drop..................

geekieme
geekieme
3 months ago
Posted

The grammar is horrible. The plot could be good but I don't even know if it's good because of how bad the grammar is. You could use grammarly, to fix your writing, because I really don't understand anything

geekieme
geekieme
4 months ago
Commented

does this mean he's going to get ntr'd

geekieme
geekieme
5 months ago
Posted

Great story. Amazing MC with definite character. Please don't drop

geekieme
geekieme
6 months ago
Posted

Great idea with a nice execution. I can't wait for more chapters. I just hope you don't drop it

geekieme
geekieme
7 months ago
Posted

Nice story, with great development. But I wanted to confirm about the villain tag because the mc seems more like a hero to me, so just wanted to confirm

geekieme
geekieme
8 months ago
Commented

pls don't drop

geekieme
geekieme
8 months ago
Commented

This is actually not completely true because from snape's childhood memories it was shown that he was a half blood and was also frequently bullied as a result and James was the main bully to him. He fell in love with lily because she defended him from James.

She was aware of their rivalry but she never really returned their feelings previously and was even a little inclined towards Snape but when he started using darker spells, Lily warned Snape about their negative effects but he ignored her words again and again. Lily naturally did not like that and decided to give James a chance. That together with his Slytherin friends' instigation made snape call her mudblood.

IN Harry Potter With a System

IN Harry Potter With a System

Book&Literature · Dreamer_1297