Thanks. I'll try my best to balance things
It seems it was a good decision to end the fight fast. Also, if they fight again, Keldin definitely isn't going to have as easy as he did here.
Don't worry, there'll be more coming pretty soon
Thanks for helping me spot so many errors. I can't fix them all now since I'm at work, but once I get home I intend to
Did he really leave her to die?
Yes. I'm not sure if I posted it here, but I stopped mainly because I wanted to focus on my other book Familiar. Familiar's first volume is coming to an end and I've been spending most of my time trying to get it finished. When I'm done, I'll continue making more chapers for this. Of course, I won't be able to update it as much as Familiar, as that is my main focus for the time being
Thanks for this. Can't believe I missed that. It's been corrected
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Familiar: The Laen Chronicles
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She's a prominent character but I wouldn't say there is going to be a heavy focus on her. There is romance in this book but the main focus is still going to be on the Laen, Fasurus and magic. You will be seeing a lot of Cassandr though
Thanks for the feedback. I've edited that part now
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Familiar: The Laen Chronicles
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original Familiar: The Laen Chronicles
After a brutal accident that causes him to lose his memory, Ian's life takes a strange turn. He sees things that aren't there and keeps having these strange dreams of the days leading up to his accident. That is until everything he thinks he knows about the world is turned upside down. After all, magic is real and always has been. In a world where everything is unknown, follow Ian as he grows his strength and comes into contact with the various forces ruling this new world. The Laen, an organization that seems to want to rule everything magical, and the Fasurus, spirit-like creatures who have been suppressed far too long. Side note: The beginning chapters of the story are a bit slow, but if you can keep reading to chapter 18, or at least 8, I think the chance you will enjoy the story greatly increases. Anyway, happy reading. I********************************************************************I This book will be posted on RoyalRoad.com by Liwl Nakam RoyalRoad Profile: https://www.royalroad.com/profile/297210/fictions171 Chs 138 Colecciones
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Road to Redemption: Stories of The Sadabi
The Blue Fairy, Arell, is a legend of his own right, someone to look up to and who the masses adore. After his betrayal to one who loved him the most, Arell is now back in Tinael, and this time, he is determined to make amends for all the hurt he's caused. Come along as he begins his journey of redemption, to seek forgiveness from those he once considered his brethren, all while doing the best he can to fulfill his duties in the face of an imminent war. OWNED BY LIWL NAKAM13 Chs 2 Colecciones
Thanks. And yeah, I'm feeling better
Familiar: The Laen Chronicles
Fantasy · NKAMA_WILLIAMS