Also, I am kind of bad at creating tension and don't want to hang onto things for long. Just like you said like a marvel movie, the villain needs to die when within the movie.
The writing style will continue till ch 40.. or near that. I think there will a changer after that, hope I have written good enough make you keep reading.
There is lot of unpack, the system play a small role, soon.
Because, he is weak. And my fault for making him look stupid.
well the plague of blacks, will be called that after I finish explaining it for good. Trust me, I didn't think it would sound like that when I Wrote it.[img=nervous]
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An Ordeal of The Warlords
Fantasy · D2_E2_V2
Well, I think chapter 35-36 will add some more context.
Arya enjoyed a special moment, even though he had known Seraphina for only a night. It felt like she was important and to be protected. "You dropped Reva." This made his memories more painful. He looked at the dining table with a guilty expression.
An Ordeal of The Warlords
Fantasy · D2_E2_V2
Caught me. I am always writing like I am writing a web series without a narrator. I will trying to change that to make the flow better, thank for much need criticism and reminder.
Well, I hope to rework on this novel, I am happy to see you could get past the first vol, I thought nobody could do that
A image for your imagination.
His fair face hid behind his double-horned helm, and his body rattled the surroundings with sounds of fear and death.
An Ordeal of The Warlords
Fantasy · D2_E2_V2
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Arya was betrayed and thrown away by the crown he served and rejected by the princess he loved. Pushed into exile with assassins ready to hunt him. He gets rushed to ruins and lives his life in fear and denial. His death came to his face, but... On a fortunate day, he meets Mercy Unsborn, a mysterious wizard and swordmaster who saves him and recruits him into his team with the promise of revenge. Arya sets on a new journey to explore the world and see it changing around him, and to find What lies inside the mind of a mysterious wizard and his team? ----- The world will be a culmination of western and eastern fantasy topics. 1. Harem-NO 2. Rape—Yes (not by mc) 3. Magic and system: Yes53 Chs 84 Colecciones
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Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation
The Crown of the Kingdom is purchased in blood and bodies alone. Once the Kingdom of Ethereo was the fuel of the world, but times have changed and it has fallen from Grace, and only dust remains. Torn apart by the civil war, five kingdoms under the legends of rebellion rise and fight against each other. The victor of this war will be remembered as the lord of wits, gold, tactics and people. For that bloo and trust must spill for all. Which kingdom will rise to see themselves rule over the White Throne? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------171 Chs 308 Colecciones
or, sir are you trying to go for a one sentence contest which will start soon?
Kingdoms of Dust: Rebuilding The Nation
Realistic · D2_E2_V2