Is this a translation or are you new to writing? You need a grammar checker or beta reader. The idea is fine it’s just mega disjointed
Overall I like this story but I feel like with the soul stuff you kinda put yourself overly in the cultivator box … and with the whole circle and spiral and yin and yan and all that stuff … your basically going in …. Circles (badum tishh🥁) And I don’t know if I have the IQ or the brain power to Handel so much meta talk. There is a reason I am not able to read a cultivation story for more than like 100-200 chapters before I want to throw myself of a bridge
Ah yes this quest I follow religiously 😁
Ah yeah I quite like reading this on. It’s just a bit annoying how the Author started 3 new fictions at the same time and waffles between them and gets basically nothing done anymore
Well it’s a novel Idea so I’m probably going to give it a read
Oh I quite liked the first part, though I didn’t get started on this one yet
Totally fine, take a break 👍
I am not to familiar with the lore of giants … do they have gods or something they pray to or where there a civilization of intelligent giants at one point and are the all only in Skyrim or can they be found in other places
This was but the first step in bringing them under my service but no one needed to know that for now.
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
I hope you continue this story soon-ish 😁
That’s exactly the meme I expected 😂
One hand movement and I wring his neck, then carefully lay him down on the floor and scoop up the corpse. One knife of shitty quality and unity, and only one clip.
I am reborn in Cyberpunk
Anime & Comics · SpaceMate