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Jossel_Ebesate

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Jossel_Ebesate
8 months ago
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I didn't think that the most powerful businessman in the city is so stupid that he failed to connect Lyra's location/house where she was raped and was connected to his classmate/lover Fred. When they abducted Fred then, to confront Lyra of her infidelity, did they stupidly not investigate where Fred lived?

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Jossel_Ebesate
8 months ago
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Suposed Baron Stuart will be returning soon, so Emily should just call him by cellular phone, requesting him to buy or secure a sanitary pad, while she wait for him at the break room

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Jossel_Ebesate
10 months ago
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Agree. Its always the case, Cindy's name always got interchanged with Wendy's.

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Jossel_Ebesate
11 months ago
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Its been awhile Cindy snd Wendy's name kept on interchanging. Please do something about it. It create confusion bordering to annoying already

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Jossel_Ebesate
1 years ago
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... do something (correct or edit)

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Jossel_Ebesate
1 years ago
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Yeah, I commiserate with other commenters, the frequent interchange of Steve Price as the husband of Xaviera, and even mentioning Xaviera as Mrs. Price or wife of Steve, ruins the otherwise coherrent flow of storytelling. I think its been the case in several chapters already. Maybe, the editor or publisher should something about it already

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Jossel_Ebesate
1 years ago
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I suppose it's a fresh introductory plot. This time, its about career, unlike most romance/contemporary stories I've read that start off on family scandal

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Jossel_Ebesate
1 years ago
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Seemed just right. After-all he only knew it just now, how stupid he has been for the past five-years oblivious of the his 2 kids

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Jossel_Ebesate
1 years ago
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What happened after this conversation of Scarlett and Zara? Zara appeared to completely disappear after this episode without reference on how or where she goes after, considering that Scarlett had invited her to temporarily lived with her in their home at country M

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Jossel_Ebesate
1 years ago
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What happened? This chapter is way out of line from the previous chapter. Was there any missing chapter?