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Finally! I found the time to read this and the previous chapter. How could grey let caera cry twice in a single night, what a heartless fool. One could only not imagine but you can even hear Caera’s heart shatter into pieces when Grey teleported away. Cruel, too cruel. What Grey needs is despair, to feel despair when he loses Caera to understand that he has been taking her for granted. I do feel that Caera should express her ‘anger’ and ‘betrayal’ during the events of the previous chapter, instead of welcoming grey back. You know, play hard to get. Hopefully this scene with Nico will make Grey realise his abundant mistakes and take reign of his life and treat Caera better. And well…, if it still doesnt get in through the thick skull of his, maybe a small love rival for Grey would do the trick. As always, an absolute pleasure reading this fanfiction, another well crafted chapter! Keep up the great work soldier!

I havent read the chapter, and won’t be able to read a few future chapters because i recently enlisted for the army :( I am dying to read them once i am allowed to leave next weekend! Just writing this to not make you feel like you’ve lost a reader! Keep up the great work and remember to take breaks between writing! Wouldn’t want you to get a writers block!

Grey you absolute dolt! For a man that has lived 2 livetimes he sure is oblivious to human emotion. I wish regis were there to give him a smack upside the head. That being said, now they have to choose between what they want to be, and greys might have to spill his secrets to caera soon.. Great work as always!

Had goosebumps reading the latter half of this chapter. The wall Arthur had built around himself has been crumbling with every new chapter and that last line by Caera might have been the coup de grace to it! I dont know what nico is planning but he better not come in between a man and his girl! Great chapter as usual soldier! Keep it up

So many emotions this chapter! We are seeing Caera getting more and more comfortable with expressing her feelings to grey, hopefully grey will follow suit and not keep a lady waiting. Oh! And cant forget about Regis human transformation! Keep up the great work as always!

Yup! Completely understand, all the settings, their interactions from another persons point of view and little expressions really help to paint a bigger more beautiful picture. You really did a great job of show and not tell, im excited for whats to come in the future!

Absolutely loved it! Although I understand why you wrote the latter half from the perspective of the crowd, it would have been amazing if we had witnessed the interaction between them instead. Anyway keep up the great work! Thanks for your effort soldier!

I binged through the novel and felt so empty! But then i stumbled upon this absolute masterpiece! I love the amount of time and effort you pour into writing this story for us. Finally things between Grey and Caera are progressing. Keep the the great work soldier!