hey, love your shorts, really wish you'd post regularly, I kept waiting for a mass release or something so I'd just binge it but.... well it's good by the way, so please continue!
Thanks for reading!
Hey guys, the author here! Real talk for a second..... this novel is a banger, it's something that'll Stay with you for a long time, it's also my entry for the ongoing competition! I promise, this is gonna be something you'll have a good time following! Peace!
Author of this book, shameless review here however I've gotta do it regardless! it's a slowburn story but I promise it's worth the read! it's a fantastical adventure with mystery and Intrigue, you'll love it.
will there be more? I hope so!
ah, so it like an anthology series? I really like those but they're rarely done right, tho so far you're doing great, how many chapters would you be releasing per week? I wanna add it to my shelf for now
it is a horror story, excellent! the chapter was shorter than I imagined but I assume it would get longer over time
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I like the beginning of this, it sounds like something out of a horror story, I'll keep going and see what I think of it
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Thank you very much, I'll take things a bit slow when it comes to the pacing, I honestly thought I was going to slow
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original Bite Back: The Bloody Wolf Bandits
"Come brothers! Tonight we feast in Jubiden!" Barker roared. After years of the relentless slaughter of their kin, Barker gets the approval he has sought! "Finally!" he shouted, "FINALLY!" He praised, He would devour every human he encountered, he would toy, hunt and deliver 300 years of retribution upon them. Finally it's time to Bite back! "Wahahaha!" he laughed, the exultation of the hunt nearly overwhelmed. He lead his band of brothers out to the first victims, the town of Bluehaven.39 Chs 6 Colecciones
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The Search for Xanar
After the Death of his Favourite Author, Castor Grimes Jnr and his Sister Cece travel the Multiverse, In Search of one where both their dreams have come to pass. Castor wishes to finish his Favourite Book series and Cece wishes to undo her greatest mistake! With their trusty dimension crosser, Veil Splitter, the two transverse the multiverse in hopes of fulfilling their desires. Minions, Mayhem and Misadventures yet to come, how will the two siblings survive the Onslaught thrown their way? Come find out! Join them on their quest, they need all the help they can get!53 Chs 27 Colecciones
Please use quotations, I find it confusing in some parts, I can't tell what is the characters inner thoughts or the narrators or an ongoing dialog. Also I noticed you speed blitz the introduction, I'm not saying your work should be a slow burn but throwing too much information at the audience at once kinda removes the intrigue from it, I want to be surprised sometimes is all I'm saying