marvel_fights

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2022-04-12 Se unió Global
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marvel_fights
marvel_fights
11 months ago
Commented

It says the 1st player founded the transcend academy. But then it says he is a graduate of the academy. Can you address it

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marvel_fights
marvel_fights
1 years ago
Commented

Come on man, a system that can duplicate anything takes time to integrate them. If you want to write more content,make it more interesting. Don't just add filler. It makes it less appealing

marvel_fights
marvel_fights
1 years ago
Posted

I have one big problem with your novel. It is how he gets energy points. It's BAD writing to me. Why does he get points because he got noticed by people. I started reading your story three times. never went past 50 chaps because of that. It doesn't make sense to me.

marvel_fights
marvel_fights
1 years ago
Commented

how do you measure difficulty like relative to level, place , or the quest giver.

marvel_fights
marvel_fights
1 years ago
Posted

It is a stable story but gets very repetitive later. The MC is always made out as an underdog. But also has good story overall. overall power system is not creative just get resources and make breakthrough most of the time.